Realms of Thunder

Experimental. Just a touch dramatic ;)

Realms of Thunder

And what if 

among the rubble of half vomitted maybe's 

erupts a cyclone of leftover, 

half dreamed tomorrows 

and what if 

it hits just below the surface, 

enough to make you fall, 

enough to make you cry out

and what if 

among the remains of time, 

your music flows, 

awakened yet half dead ...

But oh, my clandestine lover, 

I will have prepared for the night, 

my lips stained purple, I shall puke 

into the realms of thunder, unearthed ...

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

This is poetry my friend.
"But oh, my clandestine lover,
I will have prepared for the night, my lips stained purple,
I shall puke into the realms of thunder, unearthed "
I liked the honest tone and the coldness of the words. You made me believe every one. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Coyote. Glad you like it :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

[emmajoy]

A powerful, unbeautiful piece of writing that says more than logic decree. Release, confession, desperation, anger.. at being trapped.. Perhaps?

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It's a release of sorts, yes... thank you so much for your words here, Em. Appreciated :)

[emmajoy]

I try never to be too personal, but not always as tactful as might be, dear you.

[...]

fantastic write, compelling... your words are like a lightening bolt that strikes the reader. adore the imagery you’ve captured in this!!

~ thanks for the read ~ xx

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much, ms. barrie! Your reviews always make me happy :) Glad you appreciate x

[Neville]

This is powerful stuff indeed...It maybe experimental but it delivers that all important and unexpected kidney punch that takes your breath away...................Neville

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for appreciating, Neville. I'm glad it feels that way :)

[Neville]

My pleasure...........

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think our memories regurgitate too often....and that sickness doesn't allow us to move on from those dreams we failed to go after...there is that sickening guilt....that resufaces...

powerful write.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I think so too. .. moving on isn't as simple as some make it appear to be.
Thank you so much for your words and for appreciating, Jacob. :)

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Oh so deep and when it’s all in halves trying to become whole and one where the wrenching of emotions leave you struggling to survive and the ill feeling allowing nothing to stay inside dictates to the sense of uncertainty and upheaval that makes you want to vomit only to have to heal all over again- powerful words making mind churn deep🌹

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you so much for your empathetic words here. I appreciate it :)

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

ALways my pleasure🌹

[Jibey]

It seems that Coyote understands it more than I do! There is a feeling of want and hope - the music, yet somehow it is overwhelmed by the forces beyond control - producing only vomit...

An intriguing enigma.. dark and sad

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Sometimes, that's inevitable...
thank you for your words here, Jibey. Appreciated.