In Quiet Remembrance ...

In Quiet Remembrance ...

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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A bit dreamy. Experimental.

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I laid myself bare, in quiet remembrance,

as midnight spilled its gifts, 
and sparkles of dawn slithered in, 
smothering the beauty of what was left;

as Julys became long forgotten memories,
and October gave way to new beginnings,
 of fervent hopes and utopic dreams ...

I laid myself bare, in quiet remembrance.


© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay


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Wonderful Free Versing, YumnaKay!
A+ on this one.
In a gorgeous presentation, color and font choice … simply captivating and wispy, with a tender, ethereal ambience … splendid illustration to accompany and augment the whole, too.
Check "July(s)".
I'm completely satisfied with this example of just how well you've developed in your Free Verse skills.
Especially notable are the emotions that reach out and grip the senses, taking one from the material into your own world … the hallmark of a keenly accomplished poetess … not to mention how you've taken it full circle by "booking" your refrain of line one as your last.

Just an all around fine work that I really and truly enjoyed … thank you so very much! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ah, this is the best review I've gotten so far from you, Richard! :D Thank you so much for humbling .. read more
Richard 🍃

1 Year Ago

I want you to know I appreciate and enjoy your poetry, Yumna … you're most welcome, and thank you,.. read more



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delightfully dreamy tho in my opinion..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I'm glad you think so, Nev. Thanks so much :))
Neville

1 Year Ago

thoroughly enjoyed..
I like the title and it's repetition ...your poem opens my own thoughts and feelings in just such a place ...sometimes the object of our love is gone ...but feelings certainly remain .. wishing that person was still there we can only lay ourselves bare ... falling on a solid rock ... secure our vulnerability will not be betrayed ... that's what your poem says to me ..plus in remembrance we can reveal parts that perhaps we could not when the relationship was real ... perhaps one of the reasons the loss occurred ... sorry Doc! i got a little carried away didn't i?!
E.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Nah, not at all carried away, Einstein. Always appreciate your thoughts 'cause they add on to mine :.. read more
Wonderful Free Versing, YumnaKay!
A+ on this one.
In a gorgeous presentation, color and font choice … simply captivating and wispy, with a tender, ethereal ambience … splendid illustration to accompany and augment the whole, too.
Check "July(s)".
I'm completely satisfied with this example of just how well you've developed in your Free Verse skills.
Especially notable are the emotions that reach out and grip the senses, taking one from the material into your own world … the hallmark of a keenly accomplished poetess … not to mention how you've taken it full circle by "booking" your refrain of line one as your last.

Just an all around fine work that I really and truly enjoyed … thank you so very much! ⁓ Richard : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ah, this is the best review I've gotten so far from you, Richard! :D Thank you so much for humbling .. read more
Richard 🍃

1 Year Ago

I want you to know I appreciate and enjoy your poetry, Yumna … you're most welcome, and thank you,.. read more
This is a graceful-sounding & original message that leaves us to wander off on such a moment when nostalgia sparks a whimsical journey *sigh!* Hope your holiday season is bright with love (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this one, BG. Glad you felt that way :))
And ah, no holida.. read more
Beautiful Yumna... quiet dreamy feel to it.... :) the moon child is shining in this one heheh....enjoyed reading it..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

December does that to me ;P lol
Thank you so much, Ardra. Glad you enjoyed reading. :)
as I've said before You shine the brightest in this style, another much enjoyable read, to be felt, to be drown in and drift with. wistful and sadly haunting.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I do think this style is my favourite and the one I'm most comfortable in writing ;) thank you so mu.. read more
Light

1 Year Ago

You are great in everything You write with :)

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