Logistics of Love

Logistics of Love

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental.

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The outlines of the sky curled into a smile, 
the wind strummed along with the February sun. 

Couples drew nearer to each other, 
while love was busy adding up logistics 
and dividing equations which made no sense...

equal halves, better halves, soul mates and 
(in)significant others, all mashed together in one;

wiping off sweat from its brows, 
love smirked.  


© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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The cynicism in this has jagged edges, nay steel jaws I'd say. The opening stanza sets a calm scene as you draw the reader in to the character assassination of love itself!

Posted 6 Months Ago


I love your perspective here, showing love busy at work to make relationships function.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Another brilliant write Doc...cobsmacked!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Cobsmacked? That made me laugh! :P thanks so much for reading and appreciating, Andrew :))
Ha HA this made me laugh:) I rarely taunt love cause she is a calamitous comic but i love her so.... despite my best intentions

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. I thought I'd go for a different perspective on Valentine's day lool .. read more
Seems love needs an abacus so as to count its blessings. You write with a mind full of logic and eyes that see further than, ' .. equations which made no sense .. '


Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for reading. :)
there are many things that depict, describe, assimilate love...
equations aren't one of them...love is richer than that...it is not science or math...
and i love the last two lines...yes, "love smirked"---

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating, Jacob. Glad you like it. :-)
Maybe love knows that summer is a better bet for those attempting a seat in the tunnel of love. :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

Perhaps that is the case, yeah ;)
Thanks so much for your words here, Tim. Appreciated.

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