Fiery Skies (Shape Poem)

Fiery Skies (Shape Poem)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Experimental. Shape Poem (?)

"


FIERY SKIES
I
as a 
bolt of fir
would strike 
heavens and 
 earth while 
 dangling 
 from the 
skies 
~



© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay



My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

This fire reminds me of how the ancient Greeks believed that fire could burn your mortal essense of your soul away and you would become immortal. The poem had a powerful godlike aurora to it.
Me: *touchy the fire*
does your fire make me immortal? Or is it just Elijah calling down for god to burn the altar?




Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

That's an inteesting point.
Haha so you're looking for being immortal? That has never been i.. read more



Reviews

This fire reminds me of how the ancient Greeks believed that fire could burn your mortal essense of your soul away and you would become immortal. The poem had a powerful godlike aurora to it.
Me: *touchy the fire*
does your fire make me immortal? Or is it just Elijah calling down for god to burn the altar?




Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

That's an inteesting point.
Haha so you're looking for being immortal? That has never been i.. read more
the very shape of things to come methinks.... nice..... N

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

:D thank you for liking, Neville!
Neville Pettitt

3 Months Ago

I did indeed.......... N
i like the flame shape of this...and the perfect symmetry...

begins with one, expands and then ends with one....as do two people in love.
j.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I like your words here, Jacob. Thank you so much for liking :)
Nicely creative idea that plants a fulsome image in the reader's mind (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you so much for appreciating this little experiment, BG. 💜
I shouldnt get too close then.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

If you really are afraid.............. ;)
Lol thanks for reading, Vivian! :D

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

149 Views
5 Reviews
Rating
Added on September 3, 2018
Last Updated on September 4, 2018

Experimental Poetry