Star of My Life

Star of My Life

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Star of My Life

I remember the times we sat up late,
counting the stars scattered over the nightly sky;
and every time you raised your finger asking:
"Mamma, which is the brightest? Isn't it this one?"
You would point; and I, oblivious of the stars,
for my star lives beside me; within me, making me complete,
would point laughingly at you, my son;
touching your nose lightly, I'd say:
"It's right here, for real stars are not found on the sky,
but in the hearts of their ol' mum..."
Shining brighter than ever, you dim everything else, 
as I fill my eyes with your light...
I remember,
I remember everything;
as I fade away but see you grow...
you; the star of my life. 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
This is for all the mothers.. though probably not much..

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Shining brighter than ever, you dim everything else. As I fill my eyes with your light

Wonderfully poetic my friend. Enjoyed this piece, the simplicity of this poem is beautiful, I love when simple words run so deep. Thank you for sharing the beauty of your soul

Poeticme

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you so much, for enjoying this piece and for the appreciation, Poeticme 😊😊
Poeticme

6 Months Ago

Your very welcome my lady, *smiles*

Dennis


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This was such a beautiful dedication to all mothers, this was lovely and divine. I found it very sweet, nicely penned my dear friend :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Kesha! I wanted this to be a tribute. I'm glad you liked it :)
Kesha

6 Months Ago

I didn't read the top note, I am blind. And this was very sweet, I am sure Rach will love it so much.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

I hope so :)
Yummy this one is yum:p
Thanks for sharing this sweet..cute...heart warming write..
True stars are not found in sky...but in heart of their moms...loved these lines...
A thank you from all the moms ..
Hugs

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Ria! I'm glad you liked this one. Always appreciate your words 😊😊
Why do I come across such poems when I have those exact feelings in my heart. I loved this one infact I respect each and every poem written for mothers this is no exception. Beautifully expressed that moment of innocence of a child.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

Touched me ? It entered deep in my heart. ☺ you're welcome
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

That really means a lot, Najam 😊😊
Najam Us Saher

6 Months Ago

And any writing related to mothers means a lot to me ☺

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Dr. YumnaKay
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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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My writings reflect what I am, have been, and what I seek to be. Most of it is just ramblings in prose but occasionally I'll come up with poetry (if mood be). ~ We are not the same person we were .. more..

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