Star of My Life

Star of My Life

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Star of My Life

I remember the times we sat up late,
counting the stars scattered over the nightly sky;
and every time you raised your finger asking:
"Mamma, which is the brightest? Isn't it this one?"
You would point; and I, oblivious of the stars,
for my star lives beside me; within me, making me complete,
would point laughingly at you, my son;
touching your nose lightly, I'd say:
"It's right here, for real stars are not found on the sky,
but in the hearts of their ol' mum..."
Shining brighter than ever, you dim everything else, 
as I fill my eyes with your light...
I remember,
I remember everything;
as I fade away but see you grow...
you; the star of my life. 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
This is for all the mothers.. though probably not much..

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Nice yumna! But.... Is there something you forgot to tell me? ;)
I thought you said that you were a... Did something happen along the way?
Hahahaha. Jk XD
it's a beautiful Poe
really. Although sorry, I still think real stars are in the sky. :P



Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah_Allen_Poe

2 Days Ago

*poem haha- not Poe.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Day Ago

:D Sarah, well...you know now. haha
Thanks so much for reading this one and liking (to an ex.. read more



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Oh, this is just pure and beautiful, Im glad I took the time to read this.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you like it 😊
This was such a beautiful dedication to all mothers, this was lovely and divine. I found it very sweet, nicely penned my dear friend :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Kesha! I wanted this to be a tribute. I'm glad you liked it :)
Kesha

1 Year Ago

I didn't read the top note, I am blind. And this was very sweet, I am sure Rach will love it so much.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I hope so :)
Yummy this one is yum:p
Thanks for sharing this sweet..cute...heart warming write..
True stars are not found in sky...but in heart of their moms...loved these lines...
A thank you from all the moms ..
Hugs

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Ria! I'm glad you liked this one. Always appreciate your words 😊😊
Why do I come across such poems when I have those exact feelings in my heart. I loved this one infact I respect each and every poem written for mothers this is no exception. Beautifully expressed that moment of innocence of a child.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

Touched me ? It entered deep in my heart. ☺ you're welcome
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That really means a lot, Najam 😊😊
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

And any writing related to mothers means a lot to me ☺

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