Chapter 5- You Go This Way, I Go That Way, And He Goes This Way!

Chapter 5- You Go This Way, I Go That Way, And He Goes This Way!

A Chapter by Ace D Portgas

Soren walks off the train. Jax & Kidd follow suit.

 

Jax: “Well b*****s. I’m off to treat a couple people.”

 

Soren and Kidd are talking and have completely ignored Jax. Jax shrugs his shoulders and says “whatever” and heads towards Sonic Park. Soren yells and catches Jax’s attention.

 

Soren: “I’m not sure how long this is going to take. Where do you want to meet us up at?”

 

Jax: “Just come on over to Sonic Park. I’ll just be knockin’ heads until you get there.”

 

Soren & Kidd smile. Kidd comments on how cocky Jax is and how he’s been like that as long as he’s known him. After Kidd and Soren turn and walk towards East Caesar. Kidd starts talking to Soren about Myles during the walk to EC. Jax on the other hand is running.

 

Jax (singing): “About to whoop some asssssss baby”

 

Then five minutes pass and Soren and Kidd are about to part ways.

 

Soren: “I’m about to make a right at this street coming up. Skymon’s base is just up ahead.”

 

Kidd: “Yeah, yeah I know.”

 

Kidd reaches into his pocket and grabs his knife. Soren asks if he is nervous. Kidd starts to smirk.

 

Kidd: “Not in the slightest. Boss made sure he erased fear from us over the years.”

 

Kidd starts to have a flashback about him and apparently two other members who are laid out on the floor with someone yelling at them. “FEAR NO ONE BUT ME!!” the voice says. Kidd starts to pull himself together

 

Kidd (sarcastically): “Whoo boy. Good times”

 

Soren then starts to go his own way. Kidd continues to walk towards the base.

           

The scene shifts over to Jax and he is arguing with a woman.

 

Jax: “Look ma’am I’m sorry I thought he was part of a gang.”

 

Woman: “HOW COULD YOU THINK THAT? ME AND MY BOYFRIEND WERE WALKING AND ALL OF A SUDDEN YOU COME ALONG, TURN HIM AROUND AND PUNCH HIM IN THE STOMACH!”

 

Jax (trying to talk): “He’ll be alright all he ne-“    

 

Woman: “HE’S BEEN ON THE GROUND AND HASN’T MOVED FOR FIVE MINUTES!”

 

Jax lets out a sigh and apologizes. He turns and walks away while the lady is still yelling at him.

 

Jax (talking to himself): “You try to do the world a favor and this is what you get”

 

Then all of a sudden Jax starts to hear some loud music. He starts walking towards the sound. All of a sudden he looks through a window and sees people dancing. Jax starts to smile.

 

Jax: “Game time baby”

 

He starts to think of how he is going to play this out. He tries to remember what Soren told him. In Jax’s head he thinks Soren told him to rush in and swing on everybody.

 

Jax (Thinking): “Oh well. It’s not like he’s the boss of me anyway.”

 

Jax then starts to walk to the party. All of a sudden Jax feels a tap on the shoulder. Jax turns around and he sees a fist fly towards his face. Jax easily grabs the fist, pulls the person towards him and face plants him in the cement. All of a sudden Jax sees four men surrounding him.

 

Gang Member #1: “You’re Jax from the Sunset Squad!”

 

Gang Member #2: “I hear you’re quite the beast!”

 

Jax: “You’re talking as if you want an autograph”

 

Gang Member #3: “Don’t get cocky.”  

 

Gang Member #4: “What do you expect to do against four of us?”

 

Jax (cracking his knuckles): “Give ya’ll the treatment”



© 2011 Ace D Portgas


Author's Note

Ace D Portgas
Writer's Note: I'm a major spoil hound. Before I read Bleach I already knew Aizen was the villain

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Rae
That first flashback made me a little scared of the boss. ^^" I guess that's how all bosses are suppose to be though, right? Anyway, poor Jax. He is just trying to rid the world of evil and he makes one mistake of punching the wrong guy and a crazy lady has to yell at him. I probably would of punched her lights out too, just to shut her up. She was making quite a scene there. ^^"

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like Jax 'cuz he's arrogant, Soren because he's kinda a level-headed mysterious guy but I don't really like Kidd... he acts his name and though he might be a kid (I don't know), I never managed to appreciate cocky kids... they aren't cool or tough, in my eyes they are brats XD
I love your story btw.
Greetings

Posted 12 Years Ago


god i love jax the cocky son of a gun. great stories and im loving the little comical relief you throw in here and there. keep up the good work

Posted 12 Years Ago



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