Chapter 28- It Feels Good To Be Home. But Why Does It Look Like That?

Chapter 28- It Feels Good To Be Home. But Why Does It Look Like That?

A Chapter by Ace D Portgas

 

The gang nods their head and they get ready to head on the bus next to Caesar. A few seconds later they are a couple blocks from the base

 

Jax: “WHAT THE HELL? How did we get back here so fast?”

 

Soren: “I simply just sped us up. I figured no one would be interested on the ride home so I skipped that part”

 

Jax: “First of all you talk as if that is normal to do. That is a bit freaky Soren. It really is. And secondly how do you pass up on a good scene of me sitting on the subway staring outside, trying to figure out the meaning of life.”

 

Kidd: “YOU CAN DO THAT AT THE BASE!”

 

Kazuto: “Soren dude, there could have been at least a dozen chicks on that subway and we just blew by it”

 

Kazuto takes a glance at Victoria

 

Kazuto: “No offense my love”

 

Victoria: “None taken”

 

Myles, Kidd, and Soren are wondering if Jax and Kazuto are being serious right now

 

Soren: “Is riding the subway back that important to you?”

 

Jax & Kazuto: “YES!”

 

Soren: “Alright I’ll make an exception this time”

 

Kidd: “THIS IS SO FREAKING DUMB!”

 

The scene rewinds and now they are on the subway headed back home. Jax is looking outside the window, Kazuto has gotten slapped by two women, Soren and Myles are talking about something and Kidd just has his face in his palm shaking his head. Victoria looks a bit confused and tries to figure out what just happened when Kidd talks to her

 

Kidd: “Vicky Girl, don’t even try to think about what just happened right now. You’ll only go crazy. Trust me you will get used to it”

 

Then the gang is finally off the subway and a couple of blocks away from the base.

 

Kidd: “That was completely pointless and a waste of a few pages”

 

The city is very loud right about now. There are people screaming at each other, trash cans getting knocked over, glass breaking and a siren going off.

 

Victoria (nervous): “So this is Southern Caesar”

 

Myles: “Yes Ma’am. “The City That Never Sleeps.” All these noises are something you get used to eventually”

 

Kidd: “Ironically, if you didn’t hear all these sounds, then it would be time to worry”

 

Jax: “Speaking of time, Soren isn’t it about that time?”

 

Soren: “Yeah I think so.”

 

What sounds to be like a huge whistle starts blasting across the air.

 

Kazuto: “Dude this is really annoying”

 

Kidd: “It can’t be helped”

 

Then simultaneously Kidd, Myles, Jax, Kazuto and Soren all begin to duck. Victoria is still standing up when Kazuto grabs her arm and pulls her down. Right when all of them are ducking a shadowy figure flies right over them with a loud whistling sound and looks as if firecrackers have gone off. This goes on for about twenty seconds and afterwards the whistling stops and the gang stands back up

 

Victoria: “Umm what was that?”

 

Myles: “At a certain time of the day, this Strange will fly through the area, spraying some explosives in a horizontal line. He doesn’t throw under himself for some reason so as long as you duck under him you’ll be fine”

 

Jax: “I really want to kick his a*s”

 

Soren: “Just let him do what he pleases. It’s not like he’s an actual threat”

 

Jax: “It’s been going on for about a year!”

 

Kazuto: “Dude, let’s just get back to the base and rest ourselves.”

 

They all begin walking towards the base. They are about a minute away and Victoria is asking questions to Myles

 

Myles: Yeah our pad is very nice for the most part. Prior to when I left we had stolen a bunch of weights and benches so we got a nice little area for us to lift weights in.

 

A flashback shows Kazuto placing an illusion on the shopkeeper while Kidd and Jax are carrying a bench out in a sneaky fashion while Soren and Myles are behind them holding the weights

 

Myles: “Then while we don’t have beds, we do have some pretty nice mattresses to sleep on if I say so myself”

 

A flashback shows Kazuto placing an illusion on the shopkeeper while Kidd and Jax are carrying a few mattresses out in a sneaky fashion while Soren and Myles are behind them holding the pillows

 

Myles: “Then we got this very nice fridge and microwave. We have a lot of frozen food so we really got to rely on that.”

 

A flashback shows Kazuto placing an illusion on the shopkeeper while Kidd and Jax are carrying a refrigerator out in a sneaky fashion while Soren and Myles are behind them holding the microwave

 

Victoria: “So you guys just stole everything?”

 

Myles just smiles and puts his hand on his head

 

Myles: “Well we are a gang after all. As for our finances I’ll explain when we get back to the base”

 

Suddenly when they all get back to the base, they see it is on fire. Everyone is wide-eyed and has their jaw-dropped

 

Kazuto: “Hey Jax! What the Hax?!”

 

Soren pulls himself together and walks over to Myles

 

Soren: “There’s only one person I can think of that would do this”

 

Myles (With a huge sweat drop): “Yep. Who else would it be but that guy?”



© 2011 Ace D Portgas


Author's Note

Ace D Portgas
Well this is it folks! The very first arc of "So Called Heroes", the Skymon Saga. Really Appreciate the People Who Looked Over Every Chapter And Gave Some Feedback, It Makes Me Feel Good! But Even Before We Get Into The Next Arc Entitled The "Tournament", We Have Three Side Chapters To Show! And Promised This Next Arc Will Be Even Funnier, Longer, More Action, Characters, Moves And More Jax! Once Again Thanks To The People That Looked Over My Story!

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Lol I loved this chapter. It was just all out funny! GRR SKYMON IS A FAILURE!!!!!!!! AND NO!!!!!!!!!!! There house is on fire. I love the reactions between the gang! And yay there is more to come! AND YAY MORE JAX!!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


I loved iiiiiiiit I couldn't stop from the moment I started x3

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wait...what? Is....is this it? No...no it cant be it....NO NO NO NO NO!!!

Oh wait...there's more? Phew. Now I dont have to kill you :P *slowly puts bat down*

I have to say, the whole highlight of the chapter for me was:

Jax: “First of all you talk as if that is normal to do. That is a bit freaky Soren. It really is. And secondly how do you pass up on a good scene of me sitting on the subway staring outside, trying to figure out the meaning of life.”

That was brilliant.

Anyhow, I cant wait to read more. This is going to be quite interesting!!

More Jax?? CHA-CHING!

Posted 12 Years Ago


NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! I HATE IT WHEN MANGA ARCS END LIKE THAT!!! But you did an AMAZING job and I can't wait for you to make more! I'll definitely read the side stories and tell you what I think. MAKE SURE YOU TURN THIS INTO A MANGA SOOOONNN!!!!!! ^^

Posted 12 Years Ago


Oh no, that's a horrible ending!!! I hate endings where it leaves people like on the edge of their seats and waiting. *silent scream* Okay, it's alright now. Well, as per usual, I love the flashbacks! Super funny! Hmm well overall, this book is really funny, really entertaining, has lots of nice action and is overally a wonderful book! I can't wait for more! Any other comments I have on it you will find on each chapter.... So, uh, I guess that's it... By the way, you better get to drawing this s**t cause I'm gonna be waiting for the day it hits the shelves! Then my life will be comeplete... *evil giggle* No I'm kidding. But seriously, I'm super excited for more! Amazing!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great! Really good book. Sorry i was too lazy to review at times. This would make an amusing movie.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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My name is Patrick and I'm currently working on a comic/manga entitled "So Called Heroes". My dream one day is for this to hit the shelves so everyone can get a look at it...Cause I Just Gotta Make It.. more..

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