Oozing

Oozing

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental Writing.

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Words, fragmented ... still they broke me 

yours, pierced ... holding stitches on my side


which constantly bleeds, oozing...

 

feelings, evoked ... mere vapours ~

wisps; evaporated ... 

 

your words ~ my undoing.  




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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This is an interesting assortment of tactile observations conveyed using good imagery. I like the word arrangements that combine sights & sounds (evoked, evaporated, vapours) of the actual words themselves being part of the imagery.

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you for your interpretation of this piece, BG. Always appreciate it 😊
Sharp, painful, to the point... Good example of less is more... and pointing up the power of words...

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Power of words, yeah that's how it is..
Thank you for appreciating, Jibey.
Intense! Bleeding, piercing words- excellent metaphor and fragmentation of lines as illustration of the imagery. If words could kill....and they can! Very well-written!

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

They do for sure. Thank you again, for liking. 😊
words can sooth your soul or tear it apart,words are powerful

Posted 5 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

True indeed. And that depends on where they're coming from. Thank you, wordman.
 wordman

5 Months Ago

my pleasure

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Experimental Poetry


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Dr. YumnaKay
Dr. YumnaKay

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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