Ephemeral

Ephemeral

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Experimental. Written off the top of my head...

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Life smiles
when you do,

everything falls
back to place.

The sound of 
your distant breath;

ephemeral,

 yet...
lasting
~
an eternity...


© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay


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Just the word is a poem it seems. And then you paint the colors of light around it, and bring the moment to life. A breath. An eternity. All the world flowing in and out of focus. Written off the top of your head? What a brilliant space up there, dear poet. :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Such lovely words, thank you so much for appreciating, Craig. Glad you like it ((:



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Your first two lines echo what two different friends told me in the last 24 hours! One shared a very old-time song with these lyrics. I guess everyone is needing a smile these days. I love the word "ephemeral" & the way you've used it!

https://youtu.be/yfsmmk93H3I

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

I came by this word recently and wanted to write something regarding it so I'm glad you like how I u.. read more
barleygirl

3 Years Ago

Einstein shared that song with me this morning, by the way (((HUGS)))
A bit like loving whispers ....... ahhhhhhhhh! Deliciously stimulating write ... :-)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely words, Phill. I appreciate it (:
A very spiritual thought Yumna. Well written.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

3 Years Ago

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate your words here :)
But sometimes you need teach life to smile when you yourself are smiling, to be happy on your own. Only then can someone else truly love you, a great piece though, I love it :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

4 Years Ago

Hm I agree with what you say. For me it's easier to be happy when I see my loved ones happy :) ;) read more
Kesha

4 Years Ago

You are very welcome:)

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Experimental Poetry


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