Goodbye

Goodbye

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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You feel strong one day, only to find you're too weak to be strong the other day....

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Goodbye - 
A two syllable word and how harmless it seems when said on a daily basis. 

Goodbye - 
Feel the contrast of it when being said to you, rather than being said by you.  

Goodbye, my friend, we've hung along for too long.



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Zoe
Ah, that word is one of the scariest words present in the dictionary. Liked the way how you highlighted the difference between the two usages of the word...when said by you and when said to you. A hell lot of difference there for sure.
Enjoyed reading this. Great job!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I agree, it is... thank you so much for appreciating and your words here, Zoe. (:
Zoe

9 Months Ago

No worries!



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Zoe
Ah, that word is one of the scariest words present in the dictionary. Liked the way how you highlighted the difference between the two usages of the word...when said by you and when said to you. A hell lot of difference there for sure.
Enjoyed reading this. Great job!

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

I agree, it is... thank you so much for appreciating and your words here, Zoe. (:
Zoe

9 Months Ago

No worries!
Oohh.. I like this one as well...

Context of emotion... A tricky, prickly pear, if ever a prickly tricky pear existed...

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Silente

1 Year Ago

No problem, if you like that phrasing... You would like Dr. Seuss... Who is one of my all time favor.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I thiink I've heard the name :p
Silente

1 Year Ago

Perhapssssss... Lmao
'Goodbye' can be an expression of goodwill. like 'farewell' - or it can wrap up a harshly firm rejection... For Romeo, 'parting' was 'such sweet sorrow' - but he hoped to see Juliet again. But your goodbye here has a finally about it. It's interesting to reflect how a word can carry so many levels of meaning, intention and emotional loading.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

True, it's interesting as well as funny sometimes how we overlook it...
Thank you for your th.. read more
Goodbye... well that is too sad to know

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

It was, for me...
Good byes are painful, sometimes painful even when you are at the giving end. However, when you realize a relationship is giving more pain than peace, then better let go. Ultimately you are the only one, who can stay for yourself.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I've been at both ends, but it was not until I was at the receiving one that I truly felt how it fee.. read more
Deeeeeply Abused

1 Year Ago

I have said the worst of my good byes only recently and my latest writing "constrictor" is a result .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes, rationalism is good when it comes to really acting out.. Emotions takes us nowhere...
I .. read more
Nycccc.... As mine Hindi poem "Alvida"....

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hey, thank you for appreciating! Will be sure to check out that one of yours ☺
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FIN
I love it .. the simplicity is nice ; refreshing. It allows one to clearly focus on the emotion intended to be conveyed.

I like the contrast element, as well, very fitting.

And the last stanza/line of actually using your previously expressed statements, to further compound upon your meaning.

This piece can also represent the "overuse" of words to a point of them becoming meaningless--losing their feeling ; emotional integrity behind the word(s) being said.

Interesting read; well done.

Enjoyed it and the contemplation which goes hand in hand with such a poetic expression.

Much love,

LR

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

It was a recent experience with a receiving end that prompted this write..
Thank you so much.. read more
This is excellent, Yumna!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Gullia! Glad you liked it ☺
Wow...same word with different meaning...so thoughtful...how the thinking and expression of saying things changes the meaning of the same word

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Exactly! Tones too change the whole perspective of the words spoken..
Thank you for liking a.. read more
horizon

1 Year Ago

I learned more...thanks to you😃😃
A well-written juxtaposition on how different a "Goodbye" can be in certain situations. This poem is a bit too "Experimental" but is good all the same. The significance of this poem is not lost on me.

Pretty good, especially for what it is. ;)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I didn't try to write it as a poem.. Just went along with what came up my mind..
And now read.. read more
Lovecraft

1 Year Ago

Okay, I was afraid you had wrote it as a poem, lol. ;P

Good to know it was more a ca.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hahaha okay 😛

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