Elaboration (?)

Elaboration (?)

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Ramblings of a raging mind. Maybe a bit cryptic but oh well. ;P

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When appearing dense becomes
the fashion status, and highlighting
on certain aspects just seem 
to lose its light,

elaboration becomes just another 
phenomenon,  yet another phrase,
another courtesy which I no longer
feel to follow through.

And when words have lost 
their desired effect after
what seems like a lifetime
of deceitful lies being unveiled,

a giggle escapes unintentionally
silent, as I ponder over the 
comical turn of events.


© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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Perhaps you've reached a point of positive acceptance, Yumna. You are what and who you are, no need for elaboration or the contrary - however you see it. You be how you feel: minimise or magnify. with or without a smile or tear. Just be. Think that's how i see this somewhat cryptic flow. Could be wrong, often am! .

'.. a giggle escapes unintentionally - silent, as I ponder .. '

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Nah, you're not too far off, Em ;) it really is about me being finally free on not caring what anyon.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

There comes a time when being hurt just... hurts but doesn't achieve what we'd like. So, new year's.. read more



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I'm not sure how this manifests for you, but your poem reminds me of that point in my life when I stopped feeling like I had to express everything that crossed my mind. And as I've grown older, I've felt the need to express less & less. Some people just like to keep up a running commentary & maybe that's why I've always lived with dogs! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

That's how I think too. It's always better to analyze over who one needs to fill in with the details.. read more
I just love your opening lines... the idea that playing young or dumb should be fashionable turns my stomach, quite frankly. Wear the brain you were born with, and wear it proudly, I say!!!

How sad to hear that life is making you laugh in that way. If you ever just need an ear, shoot me an IM, and we will find a way to connect. :):)

V

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh, I've seen many who openly confess they're dumb enough, myself included hahah! I'll be relieved w.. read more
Verse

1 Year Ago

My pleasure!
aint nuttin' like a good sense of humor Doc!! great tid bits and musings to munch on this morning ... love those opening lines ...makes me think of all those false pouty lips and supposed cutesy poses so ignorantly displayed ... the failure of our tweets, twerks and twitters so obvious to those who do enjoy conversations ... V3 Ls 3&4 are a bit of a turn that makes me pause to consider ... it brings more layers to the table ;) ... could be poets with muse struggles ... but i like to believe poetry demands honest presentation .. could be political ... sure fits these days ... your closing turns me in another direction again ... wondering at the wisdom your speaker is hiding ... what events are pondered hmmmmmmmm your poem has got me looking my friend ...that's a good thing says i!
E.
ps. perfect and integral use of title ma'am! ;)))))

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ah, I'm glad it made you think :D I was kinda irritated at several things when I wrote this one...Al.. read more
Perhaps you've reached a point of positive acceptance, Yumna. You are what and who you are, no need for elaboration or the contrary - however you see it. You be how you feel: minimise or magnify. with or without a smile or tear. Just be. Think that's how i see this somewhat cryptic flow. Could be wrong, often am! .

'.. a giggle escapes unintentionally - silent, as I ponder .. '

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Nah, you're not too far off, Em ;) it really is about me being finally free on not caring what anyon.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

There comes a time when being hurt just... hurts but doesn't achieve what we'd like. So, new year's.. read more

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Ramblings of A Raging Mind


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