Grabbing For Air

I stitched you this blanket made completely out of my words,

I said. I love it, she said as she wrapped it around herself. She fingered

the smaller words with her pointer and caressed the run-on sentences with 

her palm. She kissed me and the word "love" appeared just below her chest.

Reviews

[Molly]

I love your titles; they add so much meaning to the pieces. To be honest, I started reading these thinking I would read two or three out of courtesy and then be on my way, but I haven't been able to stop reading. You're very talented with words and have a rare insight. Keep it up :)

[Leap]

Using blankets to depict an image of love...very nice.

[Pen Draggin']

Thats gross. No, Im just teasing. I adore it, so soft, so fragile. I'm glad to see romance back in your repertoire.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

i love the idea of words as a blanket..
of the idea of words as a gift, as love. there is such a soft tenderness here that is so appealing to me

She fingered
the smaller words with her pointer and caressed the run-on sentences with
her palm.

that line.. that is just freaking jealousmaking

[Brittany]

You always catch me off-gaurd with pieces like this one. It's romantic and not lacking any sentiment. Words being the most precious thing to the author, he gives it as a gift. Which is by far the most thoughtful. Very sweet indeed.