6:00 A.M.

6:00 A.M.

A Chapter by DavidRyanM

I watched as dark clouds swallowed the sky and sun. 
I thought it was the end of the world and I was excited
to be a part of it; I was nine.
I'm twenty-five now.


© 2010 DavidRyanM


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You're awesome. I am glad you're my friend. I adore the alliteration in the first line, I'm kind of a w***e for alliteration actually.

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is such a simple moment.. but the final line pulls it askew, gives it a power...

incredible love..

Posted 13 Years Ago



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