Chapter 30- Happy Endings

Chapter 30- Happy Endings

A Chapter by Hotaru Miyuki

* 1 month later *

 

I walked down the stairs with a smile on my face. Tonight was prom night. I had on a black and red dress with a small black coat with jewels on. My hair was piled up in a high bun. I felt like a princess.

I saw my dad, Bella, Edward, and Alice downstairs. They all had the same look on their faces: surprised.

"Lauren, you look amazing!" Bella commented.

I blushed. "Thanks. Alice found the dress for me."

Alice smiled. She had on a black dress with cut up triangles all over. Bella had on a blue dress, with gray leggings and a cream colored mini jacket with flowers that was similar to mine. Edward, of course, had on a tux. They all looked amazing.

They all went outside to get in the car. My dad stopped me for one second.

"Lauren... you look very beautiful," my dad said.

I blushed. "I'll see you when I get home."

Edward drove us in his "special occation" car to the prom. Once we got there, I got out of the car. The prom was being held at a very nice place. I waited with Alice. She had a surprise for me.

"What is it?" I hated surprises so much. They got on my nerves.

She giggled. "You'll see. Oh there he is!"

I looked in the clearing. I saw a man with messed up hair with a tux on also. My jaw really dropped. I grabbed Alice.

"H-how in the h-h-hell...?!"

She laughed. "It's all about who you know."

Robert Pattinson walked to me with a very hot smile on his face. I grinned, trying not to freak out too much. What was I going to say?

"Ok Rob, this is Lauren. She's like a big fan of you!" I wanted to elbow Alice but that would just hurt me. I just got my cast off and I don't need to hurt it again.

He held out his hand. "It's very nice to meet you Lauren."

I shook his hand. "Me t-too." I looked at Alice. I was going to ask her why he was here but she knew.

"He's your date! We felt bad so we all, including Bella, tried to get him here!"

My date?! My date is a famous movie star?! I think I'm going to faint.

Robert spoke. "Well we better get going then."

I just nodded with a smile on my face. Alice met with Jasper. We held arm and arm as we got our picture taken. We met up with everyone.

The prom was great. We all danced and talked.

It was now night time. Lights glowed all around us. My favorite song, Far Away by Nickelback was now playing. Robert held out his hand. "Shall we?"

I took his hand and he led me to a lighted veranda or whatever it was called. I saw Edward, Bella, Alice, Jasper, Rosalie and Emmett. They were dancing with their dates.

Rob and I slow danced along with the song. The song reminded me of Bella and I. I danced with Rob and I sng along softly. Once the song was over, we all stopped. No song was playing.

"What's going on?" I asked.

Rob pulled me along with him inside. Everyone else followed behind. Someone spoke.

"Now to perform her song is Lauren Head!"

"What?!"

I saw my guitar on the stage. It looks like Alice set this up also. I just went on stage in a daze. I sat down feeling surprised. I spoke in the microphone.

"Um... hi! I'll be playing All You Wanted by Michelle Branch."

I started to play. It was my best song to play. I have been playing guitar ever since I was eight years old. I had a great singing voice. Everyone danced along.

As I played the song, I thought about the lyrics. It reminded me about Bella, Edward, and I.

 

If you want to, I can save you.

I can take you away from here.

So lonley inside, so busy out there.

And all you wanted was someone who cares.

 

After the song, I saw Edward and Bella kiss. I felt a surge of happiness. I walked outside for a moment. I looked up at the night sky, which seemed happy too.

 

The End



© 2009 Hotaru Miyuki


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PFFT! I'm sorry but this is the only thing I've ever read with so many errors and mistakes. Yeah right, like Bella would just forgive him so quickly. Yeah right like Lauren's dad would be like, "Yeah whatever, just because you brought her back you're forgiven," And the whole thing about Rob Pattinson&Kristen Stewart and Edward&Bella is kind of stupid. It's supposed to be humorous, and it wasn't. And why are they at prom? Bella went to prom last year :) That would mean she would be like...20 by now. Or at least 19. And by the way, why would Bella wear the same thing to the last prom? In the books, it never says anything about the cream colored coat or the blue dress, you got that from the movie. And Rob Pattinson is 23, and Lauren is 17 so what the hell? That's, well, illegal. Also, no one wears a cast for that long. You had a great plot I guess, but to be completely honest, this whole book was really...well...s****y. I'm sorry, but I have to say this whole thing was horrible. All the facts were wrong, you have horrible vocabulary, it's not called a veranda, it's called a gazebo. How old are you, 10??? Really, you could have looked up the facts online or asked someone. You could have opened up Word and typed in the words you didn't know how to spell and it would have auto-corrected it for you. Very bad story. Very very bad. You ruined Twilight and all the other books and you ruined my view on it. Luckily Lauren doesn't officially exist, no one knows about this story but the three people who commented below plus me. So I know that Edward would never, ever, cheat. Moonlight Sun? You mean Midnight Sun? And by the way, it's called Esme Isle.

Too bad. You spent lots of time on this story, I was hoping it would at least be half way decent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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PFFT! I'm sorry but this is the only thing I've ever read with so many errors and mistakes. Yeah right, like Bella would just forgive him so quickly. Yeah right like Lauren's dad would be like, "Yeah whatever, just because you brought her back you're forgiven," And the whole thing about Rob Pattinson&Kristen Stewart and Edward&Bella is kind of stupid. It's supposed to be humorous, and it wasn't. And why are they at prom? Bella went to prom last year :) That would mean she would be like...20 by now. Or at least 19. And by the way, why would Bella wear the same thing to the last prom? In the books, it never says anything about the cream colored coat or the blue dress, you got that from the movie. And Rob Pattinson is 23, and Lauren is 17 so what the hell? That's, well, illegal. Also, no one wears a cast for that long. You had a great plot I guess, but to be completely honest, this whole book was really...well...s****y. I'm sorry, but I have to say this whole thing was horrible. All the facts were wrong, you have horrible vocabulary, it's not called a veranda, it's called a gazebo. How old are you, 10??? Really, you could have looked up the facts online or asked someone. You could have opened up Word and typed in the words you didn't know how to spell and it would have auto-corrected it for you. Very bad story. Very very bad. You ruined Twilight and all the other books and you ruined my view on it. Luckily Lauren doesn't officially exist, no one knows about this story but the three people who commented below plus me. So I know that Edward would never, ever, cheat. Moonlight Sun? You mean Midnight Sun? And by the way, it's called Esme Isle.

Too bad. You spent lots of time on this story, I was hoping it would at least be half way decent.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great story!!
Maybe next time try to make it a little more original.

Posted 10 Years Ago


lol, great edning, i just lmao to the ending!
ha ha ha!
luv it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


*cries* best story ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Very nice ending!!!!! ahhhh romance!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awwwwwwww no it finished *crys* so ha-happy

Posted 10 Years Ago



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