Poem 6. ATTACHMENT

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      H

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              Our connection

                                      is that slack

                 And I wonder

                                                   why I fell and slipped

Our past can’t be

                                      brought back.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Pax]

In times of our lives friends are always open to fights or misunderstands or distance and etc ~ it's always depends on a person who will make the first move for compensation ~ forgiveness and acceptance of what had become on your friendship ~ there will always a change ~ its either you embrace it or you choose to ignore ~ that's life and can be friendship as well ~ i guess a friend always understand. Great work kabayan!

ps ~ yan nawala na yung writer's block mo...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Hehe. Oo nga. Pag love and friendship talaga, dami pala sa utak k. hehe. Kakapanood ko ng Aamir Khan movies. Thanks God, case dismissed! :)

[Pax]

lol ~ parang kakatapos lang ang pag trial ~ lol, basta love di talaga yan ma uubusan ~ ang dami mo kayang pocketbook nabasa tungkod diyan(sabi mo nga) lol

[Debbie_Philly]

I really like this piece.... love the form and the emotions !! :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks,Debbie. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Good short but honest piece, this is truly happened in any friendship. My takes here I don't dwell in the past, I moved forward and be a better friend with or without the old one. Great write.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Well, good for you. But for me, I still treasure even the memories of that friendship.
Thanks for the time, Marc. At least you're with us now. :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Actually, I am little bit lazy now, the things in my mind all words but I felt bored writing, I dont know why.

[Sami Khalil]

A very good and relevant poem on the reasons of friendship breakups and how we should not to to the past but either move forward or make new ones or give it another chance...Very artistic form too...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sami. I agree with your thoughts on this. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Rita L. Sev]

There are so many reasons why friends disconnect, and it it always difficult to know that it can never be what it once was. This is a meaningful poem, Dhaye!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

in life there are some questions which are so difficult to answer...but we really have to understand.
Thanks for the R&R, Rita. :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

This is a related piece to my poem "Missing My Bestfriend" (Hear My Mind Volume 1).

I missed my best friend so much. Though we have differences, I can't forget that once we lived as sisters. She has her own life now and I have mine. But I don't know what went wrong why it seems we are living in the opposite sides of this world.