Poem 6.  ATTACHMENT

Poem 6. ATTACHMENT

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)






F 

            R

                                   I

                              E

                           N

                   D

                 S

      H

                                  I

                               P

 

              Our connection

                                      is that slack

                 And I wonder

                                                   why I fell and slipped

Our past can’t be

                                      brought back.




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


Author's Note

Margaux  (Dhaye)

My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Pax
In times of our lives friends are always open to fights or misunderstands or distance and etc ~ it's always depends on a person who will make the first move for compensation ~ forgiveness and acceptance of what had become on your friendship ~ there will always a change ~ its either you embrace it or you choose to ignore ~ that's life and can be friendship as well ~ i guess a friend always understand. Great work kabayan!

ps ~ yan nawala na yung writer's block mo...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Hehe. Oo nga. Pag love and friendship talaga, dami pala sa utak k. hehe. Kakapanood ko ng Aamir Khan.. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

lol ~ parang kakatapos lang ang pag trial ~ lol, basta love di talaga yan ma uubusan ~ ang dami mo k.. read more



Reviews

I really like this piece.... love the form and the emotions !! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks,Debbie. :)
Good short but honest piece, this is truly happened in any friendship. My takes here I don't dwell in the past, I moved forward and be a better friend with or without the old one. Great write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Well, good for you. But for me, I still treasure even the memories of that friendship.
Thanks .. read more
Marc Marlon Villaflor

7 Years Ago

Actually, I am little bit lazy now, the things in my mind all words but I felt bored writing, I dont.. read more
A very good and relevant poem on the reasons of friendship breakups and how we should not to to the past but either move forward or make new ones or give it another chance...Very artistic form too...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. I agree with your thoughts on this. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)
There are so many reasons why friends disconnect, and it it always difficult to know that it can never be what it once was. This is a meaningful poem, Dhaye!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

in life there are some questions which are so difficult to answer...but we really have to understand.. read more
This is a related piece to my poem "Missing My Bestfriend" (Hear My Mind Volume 1).

I missed my best friend so much. Though we have differences, I can't forget that once we lived as sisters. She has her own life now and I have mine. But I don't know what went wrong why it seems we are living in the opposite sides of this world.

Posted 7 Years Ago


[send message][befriend] Subscribe
Pax
In times of our lives friends are always open to fights or misunderstands or distance and etc ~ it's always depends on a person who will make the first move for compensation ~ forgiveness and acceptance of what had become on your friendship ~ there will always a change ~ its either you embrace it or you choose to ignore ~ that's life and can be friendship as well ~ i guess a friend always understand. Great work kabayan!

ps ~ yan nawala na yung writer's block mo...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Hehe. Oo nga. Pag love and friendship talaga, dami pala sa utak k. hehe. Kakapanood ko ng Aamir Khan.. read more
Pax

7 Years Ago

lol ~ parang kakatapos lang ang pag trial ~ lol, basta love di talaga yan ma uubusan ~ ang dami mo k.. read more

Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

900 Views
6 Reviews
Rating
Added on May 13, 2013
Last Updated on July 17, 2013
Tags: alliance, friendship

COMPLICATED (Life's Twists and Turns)


Author

Margaux  (Dhaye)
Margaux (Dhaye)

Philippines



About
Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

Writing
Walk Walk

A Poem by Margaux (Dhaye)



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..