Poem 21.   FRIENDLY LOVE' S CHAIN REACTIONS

Poem 21. FRIENDLY LOVE' S CHAIN REACTIONS

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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Just a contest piece

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I told you, I am friendly

I am friendly to everyone

To everyone who's going to love me

To love me like a simple one.

 

A simple one who makes you laugh

Makes you laugh at my simple jest

My simple jest to lessen setbacks

Setbacks which can make you upset.

 

Upset you not with nonsense questions

Questions which should not be taken

Taken just like in gossip columns

Columns of those who spoil one’s name.

 

Name it and I will tell you stories

Stories which can make you smile

Smile at me like morning angel

Angel who came to make you mine.

 

Mine. Yes, you’re mine as my respected

Respected friend who cares for me

For me that care should not be shaded

With malice of those dirty psyche.  




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Pax
a great offering for friendship...

though the 4th and last stanza set off as a lover - you know 'mine' is a big word for more than friends... maybe i see this a friendship goes beyond friends... LOL... joking here

"love should not be shaded
With malice of those dirty psyche." ~ but then i find it will always there in the shadows lurking, for no love is perfect - it matters on how you handle things carefully that it will not go out of hand... You know love is understanding...

you conveyed your poem with great values, I admire that in a poem :)



Posted 7 Years Ago


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Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Okay, I have made few changes. I think it's something different from the old lines. Thanks, Pax.
Pax

7 Years Ago

LOL... pardon my words Pretty lady... I'm glad its all good now... :)
your welcome :)
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for being honest. See, there's improvement in my piece now.



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Pax
a great offering for friendship...

though the 4th and last stanza set off as a lover - you know 'mine' is a big word for more than friends... maybe i see this a friendship goes beyond friends... LOL... joking here

"love should not be shaded
With malice of those dirty psyche." ~ but then i find it will always there in the shadows lurking, for no love is perfect - it matters on how you handle things carefully that it will not go out of hand... You know love is understanding...

you conveyed your poem with great values, I admire that in a poem :)



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Okay, I have made few changes. I think it's something different from the old lines. Thanks, Pax.
Pax

7 Years Ago

LOL... pardon my words Pretty lady... I'm glad its all good now... :)
your welcome :)
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for being honest. See, there's improvement in my piece now.

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Margaux (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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