Poem 29.   SHOULD I?

Poem 29. SHOULD I?

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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I'm afraid

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Should I stare at your window like a vagrant
For now I have so much fear in my heart?

Should I sing my plea once more
Now that it's a long while that you've closed the door?

I don't want to feel the blade that hurts
I don't want to see the fire in your eyes.

I am confused. I am scared. Should I?
If I take the risk, still the choice is not mine.

So I have to walk alone once more
For I should learn to live on my own...




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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"Should I stare at your window like a vagrant
For now I have so much fear in my heart?"
I like the above lines. Hard to find separation when heart want to hold on. Love can confuse us. Make us seek the safety of loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for giving your time in this piece.



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"Should I stare at your window like a vagrant
For now I have so much fear in my heart?"
I like the above lines. Hard to find separation when heart want to hold on. Love can confuse us. Make us seek the safety of loneliness. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much for giving your time in this piece.
Tormented thoughts articulated through an artful vision, good work, my friend

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Artful vision...thanks for that compliment. But for others it's an annoying over-thinking power. LOL.. read more
An inspiring verses well presented and penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks po, Sir Ency. :)
wow this is a beaitiful poem greatly penned.Lovely

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Nkosana. :)
Nkosana B Masuku

7 Years Ago

You welcome
We should thank you for penning lovely poetry on sincere love ...Well done...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)

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Added on July 28, 2013
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Margaux  (Dhaye)
Margaux (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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