Stone Cold

Stone Cold

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Sometimes I miss you like crazy but then I think... is it even worth it?

I'm falling into a paranoia of emotions which is taking me to a place from where there is no return
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I want to emerge from it, holding your hand, triumphant, that at last I have you etched on my soul 

and with the knowledge that you'll be on mine forever...

I have been kept hanging by a thread of hope that I keep alive in my harrowing heart
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while wallowing away in the grief of the knowledge that all that I did was for naught...
 
You kept me waiting and I kept on believing in you because I had no choice except to not believe. 

You; who I had given my whole life to...

until
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 it turned cold and now it's nothing but an icy heart ~ stone cold...



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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"I'm falling into a paranoia of emotions which is taking me to a place from where there is no return​"
So drastic and deep Yumna...
I feel all those emotions dwelling across the poem, you made the readers feel the wait of the person and how it's heart later turned stone cold.. fabulous!
I really like this poem :)
Keep it up Yumna!!!


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you felt the emotions in this one.
Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

No problem :)



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"I have been kept hanging by a thread of hope that I keep alive in my harrowing heart​" So beautiful! As always, I enjoyed reading this one :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Gullia. Glad you liked this one :)
A delicate and intimate peek inside a heart yearning before the cold blankets all warmth. An array of feeling and emotional output. Nicely done

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your thoughts on this piece and for feeling the depth here, duff. Truly appreciate it .. read more
method

6 Months Ago

You're very welcome. My pleasure:)
You are so very good in articulating your emotions in the perfect way.....
Wonderful work.:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you liked it. Not my emotions though lol it's wordplay 😉😛
Neetha

6 Months Ago

Okay....:)
My pleasure....
Despite the stark wistfullness or rather because of it; this is a remarkably beautiful poem. There are layers of emotion here flowing rather than bursting out. The reader is caught transfixed.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for feeling the depth in this piece, Ken. I appreciate your words 😊
"I'm falling into a paranoia of emotions which is taking me to a place from where there is no return​"
So drastic and deep Yumna...
I feel all those emotions dwelling across the poem, you made the readers feel the wait of the person and how it's heart later turned stone cold.. fabulous!
I really like this poem :)
Keep it up Yumna!!!


Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you felt the emotions in this one.
Mr.Writer

6 Months Ago

No problem :)
Aloha Yumna, this is very pretty by design with quite a dramatic wash of emotion. Great writing. Izzy

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for your kind words here, Izzy. Truly appreciate it 😊
I liked your poem .......so beautifully written... loved it.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you liked it 😊
Confused state of a loving heart...
I liked the way you described...:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Thank you for appreciating, Surya. Glad you liked it 😊
Surya

6 Months Ago

Pleasure is mine...:)
A romantic cri de coeur ... wallowing in self-pity... yes... very typical of how some people react to a broken relationship

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Not self pity - I think it's self realization...
Thank you for your thoughts on this one, Jib.. read more
I like the way you've pumped up the intensity in this one . . . I can feel the pleading & longing. Reading this feels like a see-saw as you go up & down thru hope & melancholy, hope & melancholy, thru-out. It's a familiar see-saw to many.

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

6 Months Ago

Tbh these were two separate writes which I merged together to make one. I'm glad you noted that swit.. read more

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