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Stone Cold

Stone Cold

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Sometimes I miss you like crazy but then I think... is it even worth it?

I'm falling into a paranoia of emotions which is taking me to a place from where there is no return
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I want to emerge from it, holding your hand, triumphant, that at last I have you etched on my soul 

and with the knowledge that you'll be on mine forever...

I have been kept hanging by a thread of hope that I keep alive in my harrowing heart
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while wallowing away in the grief of the knowledge that all that I did was for naught...
 
You kept me waiting and I kept on believing in you because I had no choice except to not believe. 

You; who I had given my whole life to...

until
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 it turned cold and now it's nothing but an icy heart ~ stone cold...



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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"I'm falling into a paranoia of emotions which is taking me to a place from where there is no return​"
So drastic and deep Yumna...
I feel all those emotions dwelling across the poem, you made the readers feel the wait of the person and how it's heart later turned stone cold.. fabulous!
I really like this poem :)
Keep it up Yumna!!!


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you felt the emotions in this one.
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

No problem :)



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Whoa, took me back to a very difficult time in my life. Well written!

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words here. Truly appreciate it.
Heartfelt words, painful and yet beautiful, filled with emotion. I love the art you chose to accompany your words. Lovely my friend. Julie

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for your kind words here, Julie. I appreciate it. I like the pic too 😊
the longer we hold on to relationships in our head...ones long over, the less we solve the heart's dilemma and the more they just become cold cases...unsolved forever.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

True indeed. Thank you for your thoughts on this, Jacob. I appreciate it 😊
Wow, what a heartbreaking tale of a love lost! The way you penned the words and carved out such vivid imagery, nicely done! I really enjoyed this piece...very fitting today.. here it is snowing out today!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh cool, snowing? That's nice 😊 I'm jealous haha
Thank you, Kesha. Glad you liked it 😊.. read more
Kesha

1 Year Ago

You're welcome!
Such a dramatic show of doubts and love.. a worry of wondering whether or not your and the other's emotions are right or wrong. Doubts but still wanting.

Fine writing, well laid and, as ever, specific in style. The accompanying picture is more than suitable!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Doubts are what makes a confused mind more confused, I think..
Thank you, Emma, for your thou.. read more
"You kept me waiting and I kept on believing in you because I had no choice except to not believe.

​You; who I had given my whole life to..."

This depicts sadness and longing in relationships perfectly. This happens all the time. Couples build their dreams and lives around each other, often feeling lost and forlorn when the relationship ends.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

True, it does.
Thank you adding your thoughts here. I appreciate it 😊
Kaliope

1 Year Ago

No worries
I like the way you wielded the emotions in this write; clear and on point. A good, reflective piece. Relatable also...
Your closing line could be a little sharper, I feel..but that's only my perception.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

It could be, you're right but idk I'll leave it like this for now..
Thank you for your though.. read more
Closed

1 Year Ago

Anytime xx
Paranoia of emotions, and stone cold, icy hearts turned old... Is it worth it... The missing... Well penned...

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Silente

1 Year Ago

Ah, I apologize, YK... I just meant to say that I enjoyed the way you expressed paranoia of emotion... read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh ohkay. Add this to my being naive enough to not read between the lines haha 😛
Thank yo.. read more
Silente

1 Year Ago

Nah, you are not naive, haha... I am just not always the best at making myself understood... Thank y.. read more
Well... this really speaks many things

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ahemm I think it does...
Very nicely expressed your emotions. I can relate to it. I liked it a lot.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Najam. Glad you liked it :)
Najam Us Saher

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome ☺

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