A Walk Under The Moon

A Walk Under The Moon

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Ramblings of a frustrated mind.. scribbles in the night.

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I walk under the moon -- my deep reveries keeping me awake, the moonlit trails marking the way of where my contemplation in the dark lead me ... an endless journey ... under the starry glow, I collect the broken threads, trying to untie the untying knots...

 

I walk under the moon -- the bitter realizations hit hard, a roundabout of thoughts and I come to a halt; the voids created by the ones we lose while walking with them along the sunlit paths are meant ~ never to be filled...




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Trying to untie the untying knots... Whuuut... This is some next level stuff... Was not sure when you started the experimental process, but NOW... This has me pretty sure you are forging a new style... From sunlit bricks, roundabout laughs, and voids within the spaces of stars glow... This had me walking sunlit paths with hope never filled... But maybe... Deeply penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Instilled and cultivate share different definitions, but can be compared in this instance... Instill.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

;p lol I'll never give you a definite yes on whether you won the argument so there, we could argue a.. read more
Silente

3 Months Ago

With you... A "maybe" is as good as anything... Hah...

They are so squishy...



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Trying to untie the untying knots... Whuuut... This is some next level stuff... Was not sure when you started the experimental process, but NOW... This has me pretty sure you are forging a new style... From sunlit bricks, roundabout laughs, and voids within the spaces of stars glow... This had me walking sunlit paths with hope never filled... But maybe... Deeply penned...

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Silente

3 Months Ago

Instilled and cultivate share different definitions, but can be compared in this instance... Instill.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

;p lol I'll never give you a definite yes on whether you won the argument so there, we could argue a.. read more
Silente

3 Months Ago

With you... A "maybe" is as good as anything... Hah...

They are so squishy...
The moon is a constant source of inspiration to me... Walking under the moon on a warm evening a way of relieving the soul's yearning (wel, to some extent lol).

As as with any walk, there are things that pass by, things we have left behind, and we have to travel on.

Lovely writing... warmly melancholic, but also cool, like the moon.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

As it is to me as well. I feel quite drawn to it; maybe it's because of me being a moonchild ;)
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I feel the melancholy, the rumination and mourning for people and things past, that banish peaceful sleep..."I walk under the moon...trying to untie the untying knots". Stunning poem

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Peaceful sleep, ah that's like a dream...
thank you for your words, Annette. Always appreciat.. read more
I can see beauty in a frustrated mind :)
Where as darkness takes over...
Emotional, deep and thought provoking poem
Well done, keep it up Yumna!! :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. Glad you saw the beauty here ;) :)
Mr.Writer

3 Months Ago

No problem ;)
The full moon is the illuminator of many a pathway than hitherto was light-less. The things it shows aren't always palatable or welcome but they may just be necessary for our own journey in life.
Deep, philosophical and painful piece Yumna.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I agree. More like for surviving...
Thank you for your words here, Tony :)

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