Lunar || Remnants

Late night scribbles.

Tonight

the moon exhaled

a sigh of relief.

How unbearable it had been,

gazing down at the Earth,

and what now remains of it...

Reviews

[AJNJ]

Indeed, the moon must lament at earth's state and I with it, because I just love the moon. Beautiful poetry!

[Chris Shaw]

A fine little piece of brevity. It is good to see you posting Dr Y. I am pleased to think that the moon thinks there is some hope. I am trying to remain positive, but we live in challenging times.

Chris

[jacob erin-cilberto]

maybe there is hope yet.
this poem illuminates that possibility of picking up the pieces...
i know the moon could still smile.
j.