Delusion

Delusion

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Still raw. Ramblings of a raging mind...

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Sometimes, falling in love with the feeling of being in love is what happens rather than actually being in love. 

Sometimes, the feeling of being in love is what feels good rather than the actual feeling of love. 

Or maybe it's just a warped up, garbled version of truth, love and lies... 

Maybe we're so used to living in a delusion that even reality seems bogus to our fake - accustomed eyes. 

Maybe it's all -- an illusion.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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From Dune: Plots within plots within plots...

You know it's real, when YOU get real and they don't run.

Swirling and Twirling Words...like the Merry-Go-Round I refer to in Ode to Writer's Cafe Poets. This kind of talent was exactly what I was referring to.

And honey, I'd bow, but I was in a 4 car pile up first thing this morning, (no injuries and not MY fault!) and then my boss needed information that was no longer where I left/saved it and had to hunt like Sherlock for, and THEN I so professionally put into an Excel Spreadsheet for the convenience of the recipient - from 11:15 am to 3:30 p.m. I am tired, hangry, and I got a half o' bag of Double Stuffed Oreos waitin' that I can hear callin' me over the traffic outside my office.

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Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

hahah thank you for this entertaining review, Carol! Made me laugh :) Glad you appreciate (:



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Interesting suppositions here. Wondering if you're making excuses for self, not quite ready to give or share. Methinks when it happens, there'll be few questions in your mind. So i've been told!!!!

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

I think I did share and give a lot too, though maybe not to the right one... Thank you for your thou.. read more
emmajoy

2 Months Ago

Whatever I leave for my friends is carefully honest or, mayhaps .. honestly careful - anda touch pr.. read more
True of many of the different types of love. Wonderful thoughts.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate your words here (:
I think it's more a fear of being alone/innate need for companionship that drives us to search for a lover, more than it actually being what's right for us. Raw ramblings these may be, but they are very potent and deep.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I agree with what you say. Maybe that's how it really is...
thank you for sharing your though.. read more
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Yeah, it could just be an illusion of thoughts and things we want to believe, but they're not true, they could just be lies, as you said!
Such a well constructed, emotional and thought provoking poem Yumna...
Well done, keep it up!! :))

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Thank you, Shaan. I appreciate your words here (:
Mr.Writer

3 Months Ago

No problem Yumna :)
Whoa, really deep view here, Yumna. Really Thought provoking and I find it very true. I think us, as humans, have some sort of need for love and companionship that's wired into us, and it explains why some people long for it so badly or stick with relationships just to have one. Awesome work.

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Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I think you're right. Maybe it's a form of surviving...
I appreciate your thoughts here. Than.. read more
Sinbulvinter

3 Months Ago

no problem
From Dune: Plots within plots within plots...

You know it's real, when YOU get real and they don't run.

Swirling and Twirling Words...like the Merry-Go-Round I refer to in Ode to Writer's Cafe Poets. This kind of talent was exactly what I was referring to.

And honey, I'd bow, but I was in a 4 car pile up first thing this morning, (no injuries and not MY fault!) and then my boss needed information that was no longer where I left/saved it and had to hunt like Sherlock for, and THEN I so professionally put into an Excel Spreadsheet for the convenience of the recipient - from 11:15 am to 3:30 p.m. I am tired, hangry, and I got a half o' bag of Double Stuffed Oreos waitin' that I can hear callin' me over the traffic outside my office.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

hahah thank you for this entertaining review, Carol! Made me laugh :) Glad you appreciate (:
Maybe, just maybe, but all I know is that the truth is somewhere deep inside the illusion. Perhaps it started out as a good intended idea and fell within the multi loopholes that never stopped, and there forgot what it was.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

perhaps, perhaps... I intend to find out...
thank you for your insight here, Drift. I appreci.. read more
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BBP
Loved the opening line here. Good write my friend! Ramblings are my favorite!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Lol it was somewhere in 20s :p but yeah send me some 😎 would love to read Richie being spanked ha.. read more
BBP

3 Months Ago

Lmao uhhh he's def not getting spanked lol
Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

Hahah well then anything with Richie in it would do 😎😛😂
Yumna I think you pose this very well. If you've read my poem 'I don't like being in love' you will see that I have similar reservations. Illusion is a strong word, likewise delusion. At the time it feels so right, so real, so natural, so everything, and this affects even folk who are pretty experienced with relationships. So the words may be a touch harsh, but your reservations are, I think, well-founded ... and well presented here.

BRs Nigel

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I seem to remember I have read that piece of yours, still I'll check that out again :)
I agre.. read more
When love becomes a misinterpreted perception of a sensory occurrence – genuine emotion is replaced by an idiosyncratic belief; this is not real love! Perhaps the poetic and pessimistic message in your write reflects that of broken heart! Well …. that is my take … :-)

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Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

The weird thing is that I think most of the realistic things/facts are rather pessimistic, so maybe .. read more

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