Delusion

Delusion

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Still raw. Ramblings of a raging mind...

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Sometimes, falling in love with the feeling of being in love is what happens rather than actually being in love. 

Sometimes, the feeling of being in love is what feels good rather than the actual feeling of love. 

Or maybe it's just a warped up, garbled version of truth, love and lies... 

Maybe we're so used to living in a delusion that even reality seems bogus to our fake - accustomed eyes. 

Maybe it's all -- an illusion.



© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay



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Maybe. Short and sweet and now I have to go rethink my entire life so thanks. Just joking as the harsh offering in this one made me imagine you walking down early morning streets that held flickering and vacant lights while you stood there answering and wondering where it all ends. I "loved" this in other words..or was it..lol. Wonderfully done. Thanks.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I still wonder where it all ends, that's kinda my greatest curiosity in life.
I like your hu.. read more



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Maybe you're right. But if you were- wouldn't that be an illusion too? Would you actually be right? Or technically wrong?

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

Sigh. I think you are very smart...
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Week Ago

And you're flattering 😉😍
Sarah_Allen_Poe

1 Week Ago

:P I just speak truth
;)
Maybe. Short and sweet and now I have to go rethink my entire life so thanks. Just joking as the harsh offering in this one made me imagine you walking down early morning streets that held flickering and vacant lights while you stood there answering and wondering where it all ends. I "loved" this in other words..or was it..lol. Wonderfully done. Thanks.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

I still wonder where it all ends, that's kinda my greatest curiosity in life.
I like your hu.. read more
Interesting suppositions here. Wondering if you're making excuses for self, not quite ready to give or share. Methinks when it happens, there'll be few questions in your mind. So i've been told!!!!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I think I did share and give a lot too, though maybe not to the right one... Thank you for your thou.. read more
emmajoy

1 Year Ago

Whatever I leave for my friends is carefully honest or, mayhaps .. honestly careful - anda touch pr.. read more
True of many of the different types of love. Wonderful thoughts.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Ken. I appreciate your words here (:
I think it's more a fear of being alone/innate need for companionship that drives us to search for a lover, more than it actually being what's right for us. Raw ramblings these may be, but they are very potent and deep.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I agree with what you say. Maybe that's how it really is...
thank you for sharing your though.. read more
Yeah, it could just be an illusion of thoughts and things we want to believe, but they're not true, they could just be lies, as you said!
Such a well constructed, emotional and thought provoking poem Yumna...
Well done, keep it up!! :))

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, Shaan. I appreciate your words here (:
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

No problem Yumna :)
Whoa, really deep view here, Yumna. Really Thought provoking and I find it very true. I think us, as humans, have some sort of need for love and companionship that's wired into us, and it explains why some people long for it so badly or stick with relationships just to have one. Awesome work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I think you're right. Maybe it's a form of surviving...
I appreciate your thoughts here. Than.. read more
Sinbulvinter

1 Year Ago

no problem
From Dune: Plots within plots within plots...

You know it's real, when YOU get real and they don't run.

Swirling and Twirling Words...like the Merry-Go-Round I refer to in Ode to Writer's Cafe Poets. This kind of talent was exactly what I was referring to.

And honey, I'd bow, but I was in a 4 car pile up first thing this morning, (no injuries and not MY fault!) and then my boss needed information that was no longer where I left/saved it and had to hunt like Sherlock for, and THEN I so professionally put into an Excel Spreadsheet for the convenience of the recipient - from 11:15 am to 3:30 p.m. I am tired, hangry, and I got a half o' bag of Double Stuffed Oreos waitin' that I can hear callin' me over the traffic outside my office.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

hahah thank you for this entertaining review, Carol! Made me laugh :) Glad you appreciate (:
Maybe, just maybe, but all I know is that the truth is somewhere deep inside the illusion. Perhaps it started out as a good intended idea and fell within the multi loopholes that never stopped, and there forgot what it was.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

perhaps, perhaps... I intend to find out...
thank you for your insight here, Drift. I appreci.. read more
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BBP
Loved the opening line here. Good write my friend! Ramblings are my favorite!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lol it was somewhere in 20s :p but yeah send me some 😎 would love to read Richie being spanked ha.. read more
BBP

1 Year Ago

Lmao uhhh he's def not getting spanked lol
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hahah well then anything with Richie in it would do 😎😛😂

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