Monochromatic

Monochromatic

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Ramblings of a tired mind.

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Everything mocks me,
the sameness of time lingers upon the air,
just lightly signifying its presence,
and crucial things take a backseat, as I look
through the backview mirror of 
my monochromatic life.
One year slips, silkily smooth, into the next;
numbers are what have changed, 
and January is just another month 
to pass-by; a blurry haze in which 
we're caught up...
everything mocks me.


© 2019 Dr. YumnaKay


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Ah I should be being inspirational and say soothing like "no no! It's just a phase" but I've got nothing. Sometimes I'm like one of those machines that spit out fortune cookie papers and you have to hit me a couple if times so I can work again. You know, like *BAM BAM* "Give me my darned paper!!!" I dunno why that works... That's like my school vending machine, you have to kick it to get your snack. Haha. Anyyyyyywayyyysss tbh, idk if everything mocks you. I mean, trees can't go "oh, stupid humans" (maybe they do...) but it feels like everyone is watching. The spotlight affect. And sometimes it's like this maze where you go corner to corner and start panicking cuz they're so many walls. Except there's too many people watching. And we run around trying to hide every piece of sensitivity as fast as possible and stumble and look like fools. Like someone just walks in on you naked and you're frantically getting your clothes on. Idk what I'm saying rn. The world mocks us, but it's not really the world; more of our perception/view of the world. So it's real/fantasy. Our heads are weird. And I've gone off on like a million unrelated subjects to this poem. I'll shut up now

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Nah, you do mske sense (like always) and actually gave me something to think over.. Perhaps it is al.. read more
Sarah_Allen_Poe

5 Months Ago

yep. considering all we see is light reflecting off stuff.... hmmmm.... youre welcome!



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The thing we need ti change are our thoughts and the way we see things- the calendar says dates change the click says time changes- what if it doesnt what if its all exactly the samd its just what we make it to be ...what if...well written and thought 🌹

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

I agree. It's all about how we make it out to be...thank you so much for your thoughts here. Appreci.. read more
Ummm - I get a feeling of pensive sadness, typically with no obvious cause accept the dullness associated with a cold winter's cloudy day. Come the spring, renewal will bring both colour and rebirth of spirit - nice reflective write - loved it... :-)

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much, Phill. Glad you appreciate :-)
A interesting poem my dear friend. Old world seem cold sometime. I wanted to read and know more. I believe we must go forward. I agree. New year, life, just goes on. Thank you for sharing your amazing words and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much for your words here. Appreciated, as always.
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Poet.
Ah I should be being inspirational and say soothing like "no no! It's just a phase" but I've got nothing. Sometimes I'm like one of those machines that spit out fortune cookie papers and you have to hit me a couple if times so I can work again. You know, like *BAM BAM* "Give me my darned paper!!!" I dunno why that works... That's like my school vending machine, you have to kick it to get your snack. Haha. Anyyyyyywayyyysss tbh, idk if everything mocks you. I mean, trees can't go "oh, stupid humans" (maybe they do...) but it feels like everyone is watching. The spotlight affect. And sometimes it's like this maze where you go corner to corner and start panicking cuz they're so many walls. Except there's too many people watching. And we run around trying to hide every piece of sensitivity as fast as possible and stumble and look like fools. Like someone just walks in on you naked and you're frantically getting your clothes on. Idk what I'm saying rn. The world mocks us, but it's not really the world; more of our perception/view of the world. So it's real/fantasy. Our heads are weird. And I've gone off on like a million unrelated subjects to this poem. I'll shut up now

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

Nah, you do mske sense (like always) and actually gave me something to think over.. Perhaps it is al.. read more
Sarah_Allen_Poe

5 Months Ago

yep. considering all we see is light reflecting off stuff.... hmmmm.... youre welcome!
Doesnt it? I feel like time rages on and I havent even noticed...like its laughing and pointing and Im clueless...

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

5 Months Ago

I feel the same way..thank you so much for reading and your thoughts here, Queenie. Appreciated.

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