Poem 6. A TEST

Don't lose hope

Be strong, my love. Be strong.
The test won't be so long.
Just live with all your strength
Don't fall. Oh, please don't sink.
I'm not now by your side
But let my love your guide.
Have faith that you'll succeed
That test will surely end.

Reviews

[Cassie]

Thank you I feel as though this poem is speaking to me. Thank you

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Cassie. Glad you find this one speaking to you. Hope you're inspired by this.

[Cassie]

Yes i am. Thank you

[Seeker]

whoa!!! ^_^
What a nice feeling this poem stirs up!
It is true that in every relationship, tests do come!
But what comes doesn't matter,
only the kind of response we invoke, does.
Nice!!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Ricky :)

[Vikrantsingh]

Good flow of emotions Dhaye, I always loved you work and this one is again a better and stable flow throughout ;)

Cheers!
Singh :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Singh. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

You are welcome dear :) As always :)
- Singh :)

[Ency Bearis]

A good motivational verses, nice one Daisie.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Sir Ency. I always pray for my loved one to be safe, strong and free from any worries in life. His problem is mine, too but I know prayer is powerful.

[TL Boehm]

This is lovely. We all need to hear words like this spoken to us. For whatever reason, the café won't let me review this one. So I am commenting here.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, TL :)