Poem 12.  The Vow

Poem 12. The Vow

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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And until tomorrow, we will be sailing In this sea of life Through tides and waves We’ll sail Holding each others' hand.

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Five years of waiting

For our hearts to unite

The vow we made

Was not that clear at the start

For we are both young

And our hearts seem entwined

From  the glory of singleness.

We walked, we talked,

We made love with our uncertainties

But in the end it’s our love

Which prevailed.

Though chances are not that kind

And time is so hasty in taking its part

To make a change,

To modify us

But our hearts are fully united,

Bounded by the vow

 that once we made

and will forever be the promise

we have to take care of

like a glass that should not be broken.

Our love is that gold

Put it in fire but still won’t change

And until tomorrow, we will be sailing

In this sea of life

Through tides and waves

We’ll sail

Holding each others' hand.




© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Pax
mag rereview nlng ako kasi nakakahiya sayo ~ ;D

what is this ~ .... five years of waiting, at long last natali rin... :D
feeling ko this is the typical nabuntis ng bata then nag hintay ng ilang years
para sa right time for vows... ayan di na ako makapag isip ng tuwid...hehe... sabi ko sayo tamad yung brain ko....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

lol... this proves na mas makulit ka sa akin...hehe
akala ko noong first broken vow..di pala.... read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Hehe. Di ba double purpose? Theme song na, karaoke pa. May bayad ang isang kanta jan 5 pesos. Hehe.
Pax

6 Years Ago

lol... wala akong peso, pwde riyal...hehe
one riyal... ok na yan ha... 10 peso narin yan...read more



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Enjoyed reading this one,

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Cassie.
Hey there! Its a wonderfully rhymic poem which expresses a heart. Very well written poem. Keep it up...

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Chiradeep. :)
Really enjoyed the poem and the flow with which it was flowing ! good one !

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Inder24. :)
A very beautiful and romantic poem. This is what life is about. I enjoyed reading this a lot!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Tina. :)
"But our hearts are fully united,
Bounded by the vow
that once we made
and will forever be the promise"
Vows are made to give the relationship a spiritual or legalistic dimension but the vows of the hearts are enough but humans need those formalities any way...A very good write and read...:)

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Pax
mag rereview nlng ako kasi nakakahiya sayo ~ ;D

what is this ~ .... five years of waiting, at long last natali rin... :D
feeling ko this is the typical nabuntis ng bata then nag hintay ng ilang years
para sa right time for vows... ayan di na ako makapag isip ng tuwid...hehe... sabi ko sayo tamad yung brain ko....

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

lol... this proves na mas makulit ka sa akin...hehe
akala ko noong first broken vow..di pala.... read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Hehe. Di ba double purpose? Theme song na, karaoke pa. May bayad ang isang kanta jan 5 pesos. Hehe.
Pax

6 Years Ago

lol... wala akong peso, pwde riyal...hehe
one riyal... ok na yan ha... 10 peso narin yan...read more

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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