Poem 3.  LOVE ME AGAIN

Poem 3. LOVE ME AGAIN

A Chapter by Margaux (Dhaye)
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For I was your past, but still your present and will be your future love.

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I was your first love.

I know I made your life complete.

With me, your song has the most

Beautiful notes I heard.

With me, your poem had owned their lives.

With me, your artworks became real

Like they have their own spirits.

With me, those stories in your mind

Had known by them.

 

But lately I can feel that you don’t

Love me like before.

Why?

What made you change?

I know there’s still the love you once felt for me.

Let the last ember turn into fire again.

Sing your song once more, I want to hear them.

Make again those poems just like before.

Paint your life again in different colors.

Tell them again with your inspiring stories.

Love me again.

Since I only live with that desire in your heart

To speak your mind

And let them hear and see

How you live by loving me.

For I was your past, but still your present

And will be your future love.

I am your passion. I am Art.




© 2013 Margaux (Dhaye)


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Wow beautiful indeed,loved this ome especialy these lines " Love me again.
Since I only live with that desire in
your heart
To speak your mind
And let them hear and see
How you live by loving me.
For I was your past, but still your
present
And will be your future love.
I am your passion. I am Art."

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, NBM. :)
Nkosana B Masuku

6 Years Ago

My pleasure :)



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lei
don't let the passion die... a beautiful write, Kabaya.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, lei.
Wow beautiful indeed,loved this ome especialy these lines " Love me again.
Since I only live with that desire in
your heart
To speak your mind
And let them hear and see
How you live by loving me.
For I was your past, but still your
present
And will be your future love.
I am your passion. I am Art."

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, NBM. :)
Nkosana B Masuku

6 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
I usually dislike music set to poetry. However, this magical piece lends to the beauty of each other. Melodies from the heart are sung best. Lovely poem!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Briana. :)
Very clever; the canvas or the subject of the canvas speaks out, she speaks back to the artist, whose love is fading, who is losing faith, fantastic.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Sheema. One of my old stuffs is that one I am talking to Art. Now, I made this one like Art .. read more
For us you need not to be asking to love you :P We already love you and your poems :)

This is quite a wonderful narration by lover and felt deep inside - Dhaye you made justice with this work of your.

I just got lost and remembered some sweet memories and which linked back to my mind and I smiled again :)

Thanks :)

Cheers!
Singh :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the R & R, Singh. This one is the voice of ART as my first love. I had that break in writ.. read more
Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

Yes indeed you must :)
Singh :)
"Sing your song once more, I want to hear them.

Make again those poems just like before.

Paint your life again in different colors.

Tell them again with your inspiring stories.

Love me again.

Since I only live with that desire in your heart

To speak your mind"
Wow. A see a lot of new realizations and confidence of yourself in this write that is commendable and great. It looks like you are deflecting some accusations from some critics or friends that put you down but you are rising above their mean spirit to peove you are better than them or worthy of being an artist...
I could be wrong but that is how I felt...You are an artisit indeed...:)



Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

Hahaha. I just felt it from the words but you are right and I like your approach to how to deal with.. read more
Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Haha. I'm sorry. Many thanks to your compliments. I hope I am confident enough. That poem is my self.. read more
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Hey girl ...

that was a nice welcome poem for me (had taken a small break ) ...
getting to your work ...its well crafted loved the flow of words ...

I loved this part alot "Let the last ember turn into fire again.

Sing your song once more, I want to hear them.

Make again those poems just like before.

Paint your life again in different colors.

Tell them again with your inspiring stories.

Love me again."

Good work girl !!!


Posted 7 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tuvi. I believe now that we are not really contradicting. lol.
Welcome poem for you .. read more
tuvi

7 Years Ago

welcome back to you too in that case :)
Nice instropection and absolutely loved your passion in art, unique write.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Margaux  (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks po, Sir Ency. :)
Ency Bearis

7 Years Ago

you're welcome

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