Poem 48.  GRATITUDE

Poem 48. GRATITUDE

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
"

another attempt...

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From that four days of floating in nowhere

He came back in this world with so much luck

His eyes opened and saw their precious smiles

But in his heart it’s not good to be back.

 

How could someone be grateful of his life

If now he feels the world don’t care no more?

How could he praise, and thank, and feel divine

Now that the things seem not like as before?

 

But after all that heart had realized

How blessed he is, why not speak once more?

The precious life he has, a second chance

To close the past and open this new door.

 

For in this world when one's that ungrateful

Won’t go on top and wouldn’t save his soul!





© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


Author's Note

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
He’d been comatose for 4 days and felt ungrateful when he woke up...

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Pax
off all the things I have been through, I always thought I was an unlucky fellow, but then again i always shove that aside and think of the good things i already have, 'na swerty parin ako' despite everything else, the world is still following a good rotation, and i am doing just good...

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

I love writing...and I'm a lover of words. I like to learn more about making poems...lalo na ito, gr.. read more
Pax

6 Years Ago

keep striving... ako wala na ako diyan, basta maka pag expressed lang ako ng mga unsorted feelings o.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Hehe. Sa sobrang outspoken ko nga ng feelings ko, sumemplang ako. Hay, mabuti pa noong summer, ang s.. read more



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Ah !! such a nice one :) Just another fine work from your side

please dont forget to review it as well

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/DivyanshuKay/1245180/


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks .
A nice inquisitive piece about a man's spiritual commitments, very well penned and thought provoking, well done.

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

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Thanks for the kind words, Sheema. :)
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Pax
off all the things I have been through, I always thought I was an unlucky fellow, but then again i always shove that aside and think of the good things i already have, 'na swerty parin ako' despite everything else, the world is still following a good rotation, and i am doing just good...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

I love writing...and I'm a lover of words. I like to learn more about making poems...lalo na ito, gr.. read more
Pax

6 Years Ago

keep striving... ako wala na ako diyan, basta maka pag expressed lang ako ng mga unsorted feelings o.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Hehe. Sa sobrang outspoken ko nga ng feelings ko, sumemplang ako. Hay, mabuti pa noong summer, ang s.. read more

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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