Poem 28.  A CAKE, A KISS  AND A WISH

Poem 28. A CAKE, A KISS AND A WISH

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

all what I want

"


A cake with a candle

A kiss from you

A simple wish

Are all what I want

Once more

In this another chapter

Of being with you.




© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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those two last lines sum it up...Lovely poem Dhaye

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Dr. Wood :)
sweet piece, straightforward

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nicely expressed, in straightforward yet heartfelt fashion. This rings true, and many readers will surely be able to directly identify with this. A fine write. ~ Robert.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, Robert. :)
Such a sweet write. It's the simple things we want on our birthdays....the things that money can not buy. Very romantic. Lydi**

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Lydia. :)
All of those are wonderful and delicious...A great write...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

So true...You are welcome...:)
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Ahaha! A "welcome" is best with my "thank you" and "I'm sorry".
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

So true...:).......
Delightful Marguerite - the simplest of wishes yet it speaks volumes about the past, the present and the hopes of the future.
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Posted 7 Years Ago


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ANTO

7 Years Ago

You're very welcome - happy birthday !!!
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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for the greeting. God bless!
ANTO

7 Years Ago

Ditto Marguerite
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Dye
A simple wish. You are not asking for much. Very sweet poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks a lot, Dye.
Did you say this aloud before blowing out the candle...nice little excerpt of a write...sentimental moments and a new beginning once again...

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Glen. :)
Glen Yumang Manese

7 Years Ago

You're welcome...just stopping by and noticed this one...
I guess it all depends on what the wish is and if it comes true or not. Nicely written. I enjoyed this.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Jack.
" it all depends on what the wish is and if it comes true or not"
I agree.. read more
This poem is a sweet as a slice of a chocolate cake. I really loved it Marguerite.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, Betty. :)

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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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