Poem 28. A CAKE, A KISS AND A WISH

A cake with a candle

A kiss from you

A simple wish

Are all what I want

Once more

In this another chapter

Of being with you.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

those two last lines sum it up...Lovely poem Dhaye

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Dr. Wood :)

[Khaled A Khunaifer]

sweet piece, straightforward

[Distantview123]

Very nicely expressed, in straightforward yet heartfelt fashion. This rings true, and many readers will surely be able to directly identify with this. A fine write. ~ Robert.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for dropping by, Robert. :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Such a sweet write. It's the simple things we want on our birthdays....the things that money can not buy. Very romantic. Lydi**

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you so much, Lydia. :)

[Sami Khalil]

All of those are wonderful and delicious...A great write...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

"All of those are wonderful and delicious." A cake and a kiss are delicious...and a wish is wonderful. LOL

[Sami Khalil]

So true...You are welcome...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ahaha! A "welcome" is best with my "thank you" and "I'm sorry".

[Sami Khalil]

So true...:).......

[ANTO]

Delightful Marguerite - the simplest of wishes yet it speaks volumes about the past, the present and the hopes of the future.
X

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Anto. :)

[ANTO]

You're very welcome - happy birthday !!!
XX

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for the greeting. God bless!

[ANTO]

Ditto Marguerite
X

[Dye]

A simple wish. You are not asking for much. Very sweet poem.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks a lot, Dye.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Did you say this aloud before blowing out the candle...nice little excerpt of a write...sentimental moments and a new beginning once again...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Glen. :)

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You're welcome...just stopping by and noticed this one...

[Jack...]

I guess it all depends on what the wish is and if it comes true or not. Nicely written. I enjoyed this.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Jack.
" it all depends on what the wish is and if it comes true or not"
I agree. But at least, it's the chance that a special wish could be granted...as a gift. LOL.

[Betty]

This poem is a sweet as a slice of a chocolate cake. I really loved it Marguerite.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for dropping by, Betty. :)