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Poem 43.  VAGUE

Poem 43. VAGUE

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
"

those which should not be kept

"


I envisaged that I am walking...
        Unshod
        Undressed

       Broken.
I'm carrying my cross...
       Heavy
       Long
       Rough.


I woke up crying...
       Hurting
       Enduring
       Wounded.
I touched my face...
       Desolation
       Sadness
       Emptiness.

I lied again my body...
       Trying
       Praying
      Hoping.
In my next waking hours...
       Numb
      Tearless
       Vague.




© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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I like the use of words. Create vision and thoughts using short and one word statements. I could feel the struggle in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
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Added on August 28, 2013
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Tags: numbness, tears, vagueness, forget

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

Philippines



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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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