Poem 66.   IF I WRITE A SONG

Poem 66. IF I WRITE A SONG

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
"

see my face within

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If I write a song, I want it just for you
Words coming from my heart, my thoughts and feelings, too
See this as truth or lie, it is all up to you
But wish you get my point,  hope you'll see it through.

If I write a song, I'll tell all what I feel
My sadness and my joy, emotion that's for real
You can think of it as chapter to unseal
A song to mend a wound, a piece which comes to heal.

If I write a song, I'll let my face be seen
I show what I've gone through, I'll show who I have been
If it will touch your life, it's like my greatest win
If I write a song, just see my face within.






© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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This piece is beautiful, both in meaning and beautifully-written.
A lot of feeling went into it that appear to flow like ink on paper.
Your face is seen, your heart & soul too! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this new favorite,

Thank you for sharing a part of who you are!
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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

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A beautiful and wonderful purpose for a song. I like the flow of thoughts in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, CP. :)
This piece is beautiful, both in meaning and beautifully-written.
A lot of feeling went into it that appear to flow like ink on paper.
Your face is seen, your heart & soul too! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this new favorite,

Thank you for sharing a part of who you are!
(100+/100)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

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This is exquisite, wow! The imagery is so heart warming, magical.
Lyrically delightful, splendid, write, Dhaye!

Thanks for sharing :)

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, BJ.
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6 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Dhaye :)
Dhaye, I saw the other side of you here. It reminds of one song sung by a famous song artist.
Barry Manilow

I've been alive forever,
And I wrote the very first song.
I put the words and the melodies together,
I am music, and I write the songs

I write the songs that make the whole world sing.
I write the songs of love and special things.
I write the songs that make the young girls cry.
I write the songs, I write the songs.

Its very romantic and somewhat melancholy ...

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Neil.
Your rhyme scheme and content is enchanting.

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Sheema. :)
Beautiful Dhaye. This poem is a song. I can hear it being sung as I read it. Very nicely done.

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Jack. :)
I do trust this piece was really simple but had a great potential menainglying within. we all want to find a path where we can express and articulate ourselves ; to let others see us , feel us, sense our presence. revealing emotions through a song is one of the way to tell someone something that you might be hid it for so long and could not tell it. well done it was great.

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thank you, Baban. :)
I must say your writing is exceptional and you tell such a touching story in each piece you create :) Songs are a way to tell our exact emotions and feelings to one without us having to voice them ourselves. Lyrics are able to be so powerful and change the world.

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Svetlana. :)
Songs and poems reflect who we are (though we sometimes deny it.) Honest write straight from the heart, Ate. :)

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Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Blue. :)

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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