Poem 7.   The Date

Poem 7. The Date

A Chapter by Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)
"

Each moment I want to be with you

"
I

The time of waiting has come
For now I lay before you like a lamb
I am yours, you are mine
Nothing could separate us as one
For love was the only music I understand
Your kiss, your touch, they're fine
Echoing in my heart and mind
Your arms, your hugs, I'm captured by
Like a child you cuddle me in your arms
For this love never leaves a scar
But only that caring from the very start
I am yours, you are mine
Forever, you and I, my man.
Each date we'll cherish for a lifetime
Since you're my husband and I am your wife.


© 2013 Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)


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Hey Dhaye ,

New one from you .... The Date - nice title
"
Each moment I want to be with you
" - nice tagline

Images used very intimate :) ;)winks I kinda liked it alot ...

Finally the poem ... sweet moment intricately expressed without many adjectives but it was yet passionately oozing the chemistry and urgency of situation .... you've it in you to make people glue to your work ....

Thanks for the share ....

Love,
Tuvi

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tuvi. :)



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Ahhhw such eloquence " I am yours, you are mine
Forever, you and I, my man.
Each date we'll cherish for a lifetime
Since you're my husband and I am
your wife." Beautiful write Dhaye

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Nkosana B Masuku

7 Years Ago

my pleasure :)
this is absolutely beautiful a gentle, romantic write. Well penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

How nice of you, TL. Thanks for dropping by. :)
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L
Very sweet, loving and open, no need for the adult rating, a beautiful poem of love

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Bluely. :)
This is not 18 + Poem. I loved it.
Best lines -
Forever, you and I, my man.
Each date we'll cherish for a lifetime
Since you're my husband and I am your wife.

I loved it, Better you make it for everyone to read this wonderful poem.
I know its simply amazing to have someone next to you :)
Its just wonderfully written and executed Dear :)

- Loved it ;)
- Singh :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Singh. :)
Vikrantsingh

7 Years Ago

You're Welcome :) Its wonderful poem :)
Hey Dhaye ,

New one from you .... The Date - nice title
"
Each moment I want to be with you
" - nice tagline

Images used very intimate :) ;)winks I kinda liked it alot ...

Finally the poem ... sweet moment intricately expressed without many adjectives but it was yet passionately oozing the chemistry and urgency of situation .... you've it in you to make people glue to your work ....

Thanks for the share ....

Love,
Tuvi

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Tuvi. :)
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Pax
a very sweet and heartfelt poem...
my guess this was dedicated to your one and only...

your muse never fails you into writing...
you have captured a sweet moments between lovers
and also my guess it match you own :)

Great piece!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

7 Years Ago

lol... pa safe lang naman ako...hehe
Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Ah, online pala... Pa-safe ha? Lol.
Pax

7 Years Ago

haha... ofcourse...lol
This poem is pretty cool. Really takes you in. I'm not sure it needs to be marked as mature but either way its very sensual...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks, Shawn. I think this is not for teens also...or am I just a little conservative? Lol. I just .. read more
The title , the music , the poem are all lovely and soothing...Thank you for sharing ...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)

7 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and for the compliment, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

7 Years Ago

My pleasure...:).........

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Hello! I am Dhaye, a public secondary school teacher, a passionate artist "married" to her dream. I write in different perspectives. So please know NOT all my works are about me. .. more..

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