Poem 7. The Date

Each moment I want to be with you

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The time of waiting has come
For now I lay before you like a lamb
I am yours, you are mine
Nothing could separate us as one
For love was the only music I understand
Your kiss, your touch, they're fine
Echoing in my heart and mind
Your arms, your hugs, I'm captured by
Like a child you cuddle me in your arms
For this love never leaves a scar
But only that caring from the very start
I am yours, you are mine
Forever, you and I, my man.
Each date we'll cherish for a lifetime
Since you're my husband and I am your wife.

Author's Note

Reviews

[tuvi]

Hey Dhaye ,

New one from you .... The Date - nice title
"
Each moment I want to be with you
" - nice tagline

Images used very intimate :) ;)winks I kinda liked it alot ...

Finally the poem ... sweet moment intricately expressed without many adjectives but it was yet passionately oozing the chemistry and urgency of situation .... you've it in you to make people glue to your work ....

Thanks for the share ....

Love,
Tuvi

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Tuvi. :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

Ahhhw such eloquence " I am yours, you are mine
Forever, you and I, my man.
Each date we'll cherish for a lifetime
Since you're my husband and I am
your wife." Beautiful write Dhaye

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thank you. :)

[Nkosana B Masuku]

my pleasure :)

[TL Boehm]

this is absolutely beautiful a gentle, romantic write. Well penned.

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

How nice of you, TL. Thanks for dropping by. :)

[BL]

Very sweet, loving and open, no need for the adult rating, a beautiful poem of love

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Bluely. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

This is not 18 + Poem. I loved it.
Best lines -
Forever, you and I, my man.
Each date we'll cherish for a lifetime
Since you're my husband and I am your wife.

I loved it, Better you make it for everyone to read this wonderful poem.
I know its simply amazing to have someone next to you :)
Its just wonderfully written and executed Dear :)

- Loved it ;)
- Singh :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Singh. :)

[Vikrantsingh]

You're Welcome :) Its wonderful poem :)

[Pax]

a very sweet and heartfelt poem...
my guess this was dedicated to your one and only...

your muse never fails you into writing...
you have captured a sweet moments between lovers
and also my guess it match you own :)

Great piece!

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Your guess? You don't have to guess, Pax. It's clearly stated that we are husband and wife. Hehe.read moreYour guess? You don't have to guess, Pax. It's clearly stated that we are husband and wife. Hehe.

Thanks for the compliment. :)

[Pax]

lol... pa safe lang naman ako...hehe

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Ah, online pala... Pa-safe ha? Lol.

[Pax]

haha... ofcourse...lol

[Shawn Purcell]

This poem is pretty cool. Really takes you in. I'm not sure it needs to be marked as mature but either way its very sensual...

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks, Shawn. I think this is not for teens also...or am I just a little conservative? Lol. I just want this to be read by adults only.

[Sami Khalil]

The title , the music , the poem are all lovely and soothing...Thank you for sharing ...:)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Thanks for reading and for the compliment, Sami. :)

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:).........