Poem 9.  I DON'T KNOW HOW TO LOVE

Poem 9. I DON'T KNOW HOW TO LOVE

A Chapter by Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)
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I do smile when you smile

I do laugh when you laugh

I do cry when you cry

I do stop when you stop.

 

You listen when I speak

You share all what you’ve got

You boost me when I’m weak

You always make me hot.

 

But I really don’t know

What is this that I feel?

They say that I love you

I’m not sure if it’s real.

 

I also do the same

When someone’s kind to me

No, this isn’t a game

I just want to be free.

 

I don’t know how to love

Or I am just friendly?

Now this is what I have

A heart that’s so carefree.




© 2013 Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)


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Love is very hard to understand. And yes, very complicated. And sometimes, love may not be what we think it to be. But I agree, it's time to break free when we feel shackled by a love. A very thinking poem Dhaye, my compliments on this beautiful effort to project the complexities of love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

6 Years Ago

I am looking forward to reading more from this series Dhaye. Your thoughts are penned so impressivel.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Ahaha! I'm afraid you'll only get bored with the repeated concepts of gloom and frustration. My chee.. read more
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

Believe me Dhaye, I am going through the same phase as you. So I'll understand and identify with you.. read more



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Love is very hard to understand. And yes, very complicated. And sometimes, love may not be what we think it to be. But I agree, it's time to break free when we feel shackled by a love. A very thinking poem Dhaye, my compliments on this beautiful effort to project the complexities of love.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

DIVYA

6 Years Ago

I am looking forward to reading more from this series Dhaye. Your thoughts are penned so impressivel.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Ahaha! I'm afraid you'll only get bored with the repeated concepts of gloom and frustration. My chee.. read more
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

Believe me Dhaye, I am going through the same phase as you. So I'll understand and identify with you.. read more
Good stuff! Was really taken with this one.. Can relate:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Clare. Just an old write...

Someone under confusion...
This is one of the most American 21st century poems that I've ever read. I like it.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rob Ert

6 Years Ago

I'm sorry...The good qualities of your poem made me attribute the work to the US. "You always make m.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Haha! Maybe I am just flexible when it comes to choice of words. Lol.
Rob Ert

6 Years Ago

Of course you are : ) It was nice meeting you...I'll fallow you...please keep on embellishing this w.. read more
This poem stirs up the memories in me, especially in the first stanza!
The kind of feeling that slowly melts my seconds as I continually progress to read
the whole poem until those words found me again - ended up having the same feeling.
My heart was carefree :S


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It seems to me that you do know how to love... But there are so many many ways and hues that love can take.... Understanding which shade your heart has decided on can indeed be hard...

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by, HK. Confusion really takes sometimes. This is an old stuff. :)
"You listen when I speak

You share all what you’ve got

You boost me when I’m weak

You always make me hot."
A beautiful poem cascading with lovely emotions and feathery love that is carried by the zephyrs .
What is love but two hearts listening and obeying each other and respecting their time and space. Bravo...:)


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Sami. Glad you like this simple piece. :)
Sami Khalil

6 Years Ago

I do . You are welcome...:)
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Pax
Carefree is better than chained of someone else past that can never return...
when your broken hearted you feel that you don't know to love anymore for healing the broken takes time.

A heartfelt piece...
Great one Pretty Dhaye...


Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

6 Years Ago

haha... atleast you achieved something diba... kaya pala blooming.... inspired ata.. :D
effect.. read more
Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Nagpapatahi kasi si Gab ng damit na pang-Lady Gaga kaya dodoblehin ko para makapagsuot din ako kaya .. read more
Pax

6 Years Ago

haha... we do like to have fun kaya ganun... enjoy ng enjoy through words of happy thoughts... ganun.. read more
A beautiful poem. Love is hard to understand and harder to control. The heart make us celebrate and make us know fear also. Good to be carefree and wild. Sometime better to be free in mind and in heart. Love is a long ride. We need many good dances to know we had lived. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Daisie "Dhaye" Vergara (Daisie Partido)

6 Years Ago

Thanks, CP, my first reviewer in this poem. Lol.
It's an old stuff, the piece I wrote sometime.. read more

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