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Surprise!

A Chapter by Some Random Person.

We finally agreed, and went on the highway. I really wish we really didn't, but that's out of my hands. It pretty much freaked out Haylee a lot, which was understandable. Cars were constantly honking at us and drivers were shouting words to us like, "Get off the road!" or "I'm calling the cops!" or "Why are you kidnapping that girl?" Sometimes their language was much worse. 
When we got home, with two tired werewolves and a sleeping girl, every step we took seemed like a mile of running.
"See ya tomorrow?" Elijah asked me. Haylee was still sleeping on his back.
"Hopefully, yeah." I replied.
"Goodnight, then," he said, clearly wanting to close his eyes. He was so sleepy, I could see it.
I turned around and went to the back of the house, but then, I stopped in my tracks. "Wait," I called out to him.
"What?" He asked sleepily.
"Call me if something happens," I said hurriedly, "Please." I added. Then I sent him, We need to make sure that Haylee stays a normal human.

What do you mean? 

You know exactly what I mean.

You know she's far from normal. 

Not like we are. Now stay in that house when you get in. Call me if any trouble comes.

Okay, fine. 

Night.

Night.

Then I went to my window and slid in hurriedly. I walked around to my bedroom door and went to get the dogs. When I went into the livingroom to get them, my grandparents scolded me.
"Where have you been?"
"In my room," I lied. "I was on the other side of the far bed. Was I that good at hiding?"
"Yes. Apparently." my grandmother replied. Then I reached down to pick up their dog Tiberius, and took him to my room.
"Night, Grandma." I said before I shut my bedroom door.
"Don't tell me you can talk to me." I told Tiberius. 
"Actually, now I can." I nearly screamed. "You weren't there, I know."
"Why do you think that?" I asked, suspiciously.
"Because I looked there. You weren't there." Tiberius said.
"Okay, so you know that I wasn't in this house. What else is new?" I replied.
"Well, where were you?" he asked.
Why do you want to know? I tested him. 
Because I need to know where everyone in this household goes. I'm the guarddog, so to speak.

Okay, I was fighting Gertinald.

Who's Gertinald?

An evil werewolf who keeps going after me and my friends across the street.

You mean Haylee, Elijah, and Nate?

Well, the possible exception of Nathan, but yes.

Ah, I see.

Yes, now settle down and please go to sleep.

Why? 

Because I've had a long day and I really would like to sleep.

If you want any help with things, or need it, be sure to tell me.

Yeah? What'd you be able to do? You're just a small lap dog. 

Looks can be misleading. He looked at the bed. And calmed down. I got in bed and turned off the lamp. Then I starred for about a minute then fell asleep, wondering what he meant.


© 2011 Some Random Person.


Author's Note

Some Random Person.
So, how was it? So now Tiberius, the dog can now speak to Elizabeth. What do you think of it now? What do you think happens next?

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I'm so sorry for not reviewing the chapters. I've been reading them and not finding the time to review them. So, here's my review:

You're book is really good. The characters have really progressed and I really love the plot line. You used yourself as the main character, which isn't a bad thing. It has a great flow and the chapters don't move too fast or too slow. Your descriptions are very well, but maybe a little more could help the reader make the book come to life. Your tone is very good and I love the way you inspire the reader to keep reading on. :)

~Lizzard~

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A very good chapter. I had to a quick re-read to catch-up. I like her concern for the house. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


I thought this was really interesting chapter. Doggy can talk O.o
Oh well I thought it was interesting that he could. I don't know...but it is weird. Lol. Can't wait to read on. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That's just epic. She can talk a dog :O Amazing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think being able to talk to a dog could be interesting. Well any animal really. This was a good chapter and I'll have to keep reading to find out what happens next.

Posted 12 Years Ago


i dont know but it was good and the idk from what would happen next !

Posted 12 Years Ago


I'm so sorry for not reviewing the chapters. I've been reading them and not finding the time to review them. So, here's my review:

You're book is really good. The characters have really progressed and I really love the plot line. You used yourself as the main character, which isn't a bad thing. It has a great flow and the chapters don't move too fast or too slow. Your descriptions are very well, but maybe a little more could help the reader make the book come to life. Your tone is very good and I love the way you inspire the reader to keep reading on. :)

~Lizzard~

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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