Seasons

lost in freeze
dead winter
seemingly

 

blown away
by autumn’s hasty breeze
then

 

yet
the painful throb
with every beat
the heart unwillingly plays
says
in a rush of blood

it will be found

 

now

summer dances to the sounds
that spring sang
and washed away
all the pains
of winter’s cold faze

 

 

and so it was

Reviews

[Norma M Sutton]

I love this. I can see spring starting to wash away our winter's pains already.

[Trish D.]

winters cold faze is harder still without you here to warm our hearts with your latest thoughts. Where have you got to? Happy new year from another wondering mind.

[Rouillie Wilkerson]

Had a nice rythym. Not to perfect, yet pleasant like silently skipping flat, round stones across a still lake. I like this one.

[*** Hey Jude***]

From start to finish this read captivates. I love the imagery you have used in this beautiful write of season's, how they change, and are intertwined with our lives.
Awesome my Friend ~ :-)

[Neva Flores - Changeful..]

summer dances to the sounds
that spring sang
and washed away
all the pains .........beautiful chapter!

[Pax]

refreshing as the spring sang...i really like how you used the seasons and put into a wonderful poem. a brilliant image of the 4 seasons.

[Robbie]

A refreshing view of the seasons changing...dancing, singing...
What a lovely write. Well penned!

[Frank James Davis]

A starkly fresh perspective; profound and lovely perceptions.
High-level work, WM!

[Corset]

oh I love how you closed it! It sounds like a narration of the phases of a budding romance to me! :P wonderful!

[Renée J. Martin]

I have read this a few times now..and I keep envisioning the wizard of oz..or maples when their sap runs.. Awaking ! ...