Signed With Romance

Signed With Romance

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

watching maple leaves, maybe

"

in unison,
 
in a river of love
they twirled
into trance

 

their seal of love
spun and swirled  then
signed with romance

 

 

but

 

oblivion concealed
a deadly deal
in

a desperate dance



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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I don't know why but this makes me think of the mating rites of the praying Mantis,
a dance of love camoflaged (msp?) in the leaves and then she'll eat her mate, hardly seems worth it, but his offspring will live on to dance the dance again, the ultimate male sacrifice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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desperate dance...i like it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Romance is a deadly dance. You never know what the finale will be, or if you will even get there. I like your content. It has good meaning. Good job on the poetry, Wondering Mind.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very refreshing and colorful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


the things given, are not given...nothing is given...there are no deals...that the dance is sometimes desperate, it could be we have a very sad god...or maybe we're missing something...at least we have poetry

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like how this flows. The twirling/swirling is almost palatable

Posted 8 Years Ago


I never look past their dance in the air..I shall thank them next time..as I walk through the beauty of the fallen...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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