Language

Language

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

How poor

my language must seem

to your learned eyes,


but


it is the treasure of my heart

that I lay before you


read me well,

read me kind,

my friend



© 2012 Wondering Mind


Author's Note

Wondering Mind
Answering Emily Burn's "The Heart of Me"

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this was a pouring of sincerity and humility, how naturally you spun this heartfelt answer, the most valuable gift a writer could offer.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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wow, such few words speaks too much meaning. good work. i liked it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Perfectly conveyed... a language to treasure, to hold close to the heart. This is Lovely...truly heartfelt.

Posted 8 Years Ago


i needed these words today, how miraculous to find them again

Posted 8 Years Ago


You have always had a place in my heart...earning it by such graceful words written in a caring way that always holds me keeping me wrapped warmly likened to that favorite robe and slippers I cherish as I sip a hot cup of tea...I am happy to read your words and happier to call you friend...

Posted 9 Years Ago


I heard through the grapevine that someone said this place wasn't important. That I shouldn't be in here flirting with men. I don't think they realize how much more there is to the conversations I have. What it means to me to share treasured words.

You've taken the words right out of my heart

read me well,
read me kind,
my friend

You're getting to be one of my favorite poets.

Posted 9 Years Ago


how rich your language is
to my unlearned eyes

Posted 9 Years Ago


All words are treasures of the heart, and how well you convey that emotion, all we can ask of people is to be kind and understand, beautiful sentiment.

Posted 9 Years Ago


A soft and gently spoken piece. It speaks a lot and is written beautifully


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. i'm incapable of kindness, remember? ... but this is oh so moving and overwhelming and beautifully written ... you bring out the genius of simplicity and expression ... your golden heart pours with these words ... and we're all so blessed to read you, oh wondering mind ... i cannot imagine the universe of verse without your words ...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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