Fish and Chips

Fish and Chips

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

Bullets paint blood scenes

News paper wraps fish and chips

Peace cries agony



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Well it certainly wasn't what I expected...but it sure makes one think ..Sometimes I wish I understood, but I realize if I understood...I would be one of them...
So my voice and tears will join the cry of Peace..Always..pounding again the ground in rhythm with All my brothers and sisters of this world...

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is a pretty thought.
we need more compassion in this world.
indeed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


such a wonderful Haiku, I wish I could write them, love reading them though.

Posted 11 Years Ago


In your bio you said that english was not your first language.
Poetry was your first language
one that so many have lost.


Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Another amazing write you have penned in so few words, shows true talent. Keep writing, I love the way your writes move me. PW

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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You barely said a thing at all, yet I think it's more powerful that way. It's real, blunt, and so much more than just three lines.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I really like this poem because it's set in abstraction, flows with a deeper meaning, reminds me of reality and life itself, particularly like the way the ideas come together, keep up the great work.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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