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Totally Unrelated

Totally Unrelated

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

Someone asked me

Did I do grass or hash in my days


I lay on grass

and I hashed its lay

does that count in any way?


They asked again;

Do you know the difference

between right or wrong?


I know right from left

if that’s what you meant.

but judgment is a different song


By now, 

they gave up on me

and smiled at me

with a different look

like I’ve read once in a book

that was all about grass and hash, and hey!

Or was it hay?

© 2010 Wondering Mind

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Lol wow, you're impressing me more and more. I mean, I was already impressed by your work, but wow. There are some really good people on here. I think you've just made it to my top (some random number). clever, indeed.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Very clever and unique poem. It reads like a riddle. Fun poem. You had them guessing the whole time. Fantastic write!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Brilliant, clever write! Much enjoyed and it made me smile!

Posted 10 Years Ago

Yes i liked the right and wrong thing ,and loved the answer
the right and left is what they meant..
i am glad they gave up on you
they never gave up on me
and they are still questioning me
and still i am looking for the answer
loved this write
lovely write..

Posted 10 Years Ago

I know right from left
if that’s what you meant.
but judgment is a different song

Great have a right answer for everything........nosey people huh?!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

I am often glad that I have foolish ways, that way the folks I don't want to fool with look the other direction, and those with imaginations appreciate me for what I am

Posted 10 Years Ago

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. hay ... it's hay ... make hay while the sun shines, don't you know? ... i'm crackin' up insane ... eben and i used to read poetry and determine if the hash consumed before writing it was any good ... i read this and think ... this is beyond hash being good ... this is hash ... thanks for rolling this lovely amsterdam for me my friend ... serah's hart beats for you ... :D ...

Posted 10 Years Ago

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