Take Care of Me

Take Care of Me

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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Prompt 3- Weird Writers Group

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you step on me

day in

and day out

I never shout


and see

my smile comes back

I shine again

once

you take care of me



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Author's Note

Wondering Mind
Write from the point of view of a freshly scrubbed floor.
(It can be a poem, story, whatever you like)

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. brilliant !!! ... what a metaphor !!! ...

there's more care
in care
than
there is
in caution
and precaution

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like this, kinda gives an idea of something else that isn't a newly cleaned for I like that. haha So, people are really getting into these prompts? That's good, it's not just a useless group. I like this short, simple, and it has that way of refreshing itself at the end. Good Work!

Posted 9 Years Ago


funny, before I read your Author's note, I pictured a doormat of some description; just my illogical brain at its usual work...
short and sweet, you've personified perfectly, and given the floor a distinct personality...haha.
good work.


Posted 9 Years Ago


more likely a story, but it could also be a book if you will just work hard for it, a lovely and interesting book about how could one person should treasure another =D nice work!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago



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