through eyes of curiosity

through eyes of curiosity

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

thoughts                                                                                                         
invade,                                                                                               
piercing my                                                                            
tranquillity                                                                  
coring the shelter                                                        
of my thick ignorance.                                               
doors once locked with rusted locks                        
open to virgin horizons                      
light shines bright on my dark drenched knowledge
I look through eyes of curiosity


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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Very special poem.

doors once locked with rusted locks
You might try secured in place of locked.
Of course it was easy to think of one word, you had
to think of all the rest.
Anything written with few words usually says more
than long drawn out stories.
My favorite !
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love the pic of the Lion on this, such wild savage creatures one second and in the next they are just huge playful cats. Love them myself, love to watch them on the discovery channel.

Posted 8 Years Ago


ah, good

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. oh, what an etheree ... and what a choice of topic ... the two blend and complement each other magically ... every word is perfect ... you unravel well ... and what you demonstrate is sheer excellence in thinking ... there is much too much to learnt from you and your astounding humility ... thank you, WM ... you remain one of my favourite rocket launchers ... :) ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometimes curiosity isn't so insightful. Loved, loved, loved the imagery behind letting go of stubbornness and humbly learning. Very creative, Mind of Wonders. Very creative, indeed.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Nice write, for so few words they say so much. Well Done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


Very special poem.

doors once locked with rusted locks
You might try secured in place of locked.
Of course it was easy to think of one word, you had
to think of all the rest.
Anything written with few words usually says more
than long drawn out stories.
My favorite !
---- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is good. even with the lack of words through each stanza, it's still very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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