A Comet

A Comet

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
"

a wee tribute; in appreciation of many

"

like stars
burning with emotion
                 with thought
 


 lights in the dark 
                shinning beautiful
                              direction

 

a comet

 

I roam

orbiting their realm
               wandering
                

wondering

 

that
I may have been

once

 

of the same essence



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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If that essence could be described as unique and creative, your position has always been secure.
While realizing this piece is also a cosmological statement, I just felt strongly compelled to deal with what seems to me to be an inapplicable personal metaphor.
Still, this is lovely work, wherein brilliance knows humility .

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Well observed, Frank. It was intended to answer the "wondering" :)



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What a beautiful thought! I was able to see a comet while winter backpacking ..the night sky is a wonder.. and that comet.. made that bit of night sky spectacular ! Just like here ( :

Posted 8 Years Ago


Beautifully written and I enjoyed reading of your poem. Thanks for sharing !

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's wonderful to orbit their realm ...the beauty of the stars can be magnetic. This is beautifully written. Lovely!

Posted 8 Years Ago


If that essence could be described as unique and creative, your position has always been secure.
While realizing this piece is also a cosmological statement, I just felt strongly compelled to deal with what seems to me to be an inapplicable personal metaphor.
Still, this is lovely work, wherein brilliance knows humility .

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

Well observed, Frank. It was intended to answer the "wondering" :)
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Pax
you paint such beautiful words in such short manner. I enjoyed this
:D

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I think you just proved it! This is beautiful, Wandering :)

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Wondering Mind

8 Years Ago

That is very kind of you to say. Thank you :)

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