I love you

I love you

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

 

Not on distant stars
in velvet skies
of which dreamers recite
and poets write
Nor painted on rainbows
in bright colors and hue
or pearled in deep oceans
of mysterious currents blue.
Not emblazoned with saffron on virgin silk,
nor is it signed with royal ink

I’m a simple man 
with a simple life
 
No, 
no,
my love is real
my love’s for life
my love is true
 
On the walls of my heart
you'll find engraved 
"I love you"


© 2010 Wondering Mind


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oh, these words are real and true and beautiful

Posted 9 Years Ago


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. you're right ... love is beautiful ... and it's forever ... it doesn't need locking and unlocking ... it just is ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


somewhere along the line i stopped trying to guarantee tomorrow with my oaths, and concentrated on making sure my heart is swept clean of debris every day

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Beautiful rhyme in a wonderful love song. Excellent. ~Pamela

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is perfect in every way. No parades or neon lights -- it just is what it is -- LOVE. Nuff said.

Beautifully written!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very unique format, and very strong words. You did an amazing job here. I look forward to reading more. Great job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so sweet...
I like the totally lolz title for a love poem :P .

Nice write.

A.M.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Oh my gosh, this is so tender and touching. Sometimes we take the simplicity out of love by making it more complicated than it needs to be. This is truly a beautiful work. For someone who's first language is not English, you have a great grasp of the words. Kuddos!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love the placemenbt of the words in this one. It adds so much to how it reads....
just so beautiful with flawless rhyme....
ANother gorgeous write...Your poetry is a delight to read...

Lynda

Posted 11 Years Ago


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