Lost in Translation

Not the movie

much meaning

in your utterance

I’m sure

 

some-why

I can't understand

 

may be

 

my skills for lip reading have lazed

or

maybe my will has waned

or

it's just that

you lost me

some-time

 

in life’s translation

Reviews

[Pax]

hmm...im also lost in the translation of life. well done again my friend.

[Corset]

hmmm, I'm seeing some-why and some-time, maybe that is all you need to understand is some "why" and some "time". what? you heard me :)

[FJ Davis]

What's to be added?
Work sufficient unto itself.

[paul]

ahhh... translation - great word. seems like you've uncovered a deeper meaning here

[.]

. no exit, eh? ... :) ...

[Emily B]

as I sit humbly and reflect on the wonder of your write, I wonder a little where you are a magician

your words do such amazing things

[ForTheWorld]

nice poem, if I could rate it from one to ten definitely it will score 10 the perfect hahahahah..nice, very nice

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. ahhhhh ... utter remarkable brilliance ... there's really no measure of things we lose to this ... a phenomenal expression this is ... of observation ... wisdom ... and a life lesson we all need ...