Maybe

Maybe

A Chapter by Wondering Mind

Maybe the labors of this night

give birth to a smiling day

 

I’ll feed patience with hope

silently sit,

caressing curious consciousness

with wondering waking dreams 

that



maybe tomorrow 

is

a new day



© 2010 Wondering Mind


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a 'thinking' poem, I think!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Birth in the form of tomorrow! This is so beautiful yet so simple. I absolutely love this poem! It speaks for itself; it's beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


meditative in the making of tomorrows

Posted 11 Years Ago


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simply simplistic :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sweet and very poignant! Pessimism to optimism expressed very well! Good job here, Wondering Mind!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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- i'd applaud the alliteration - but there's so much more to applaud - and yes - i agree with serah - tomorrow is - always - a brand new day - and there's no telling - better or worse - but new - yes - we can be sure of that!

Posted 11 Years Ago


maybe

Posted 11 Years Ago


Oh I like this one!

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. it is ... it always is ... :) ... brilliantly expressed ...


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Yes, yes... maybe it is... or maybe it's groundhogs day... Let's hope it's not the latter. Well said, sir.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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