What Remains

 

Sun sets over ocean blue

Waves, indifferent wave

One day less of what remains

Reviews

[Seracies]

I loved the motion of the poem, how it flowed, wandering and restless into the simplicity of moving and losing something. I really like this one.

[. serah .]

. profound beyond measure ... we are surrounded by an engulfing "indifference" ... and it does feel like the countdown has begun ... plus ... i agree with em ...

[em]

one day more of what's done with
another day looms
waiting for absolution

beautiful words - serene - thought provoking - brilliant! as always!

[LaPluma]

only each day

[Angel Baby]

You sure have a way with words...*Sigh* another great write. P.W.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Very nice.

[Pamela A. Lamppa]

LIfe is short. Vision can be long, but time is always fleeting.
Beautiful expessed in brevity.
I can connect to these words for a million reasons. Well done. ~Pamela