Your Naught, My Nothing

confused, still

at sixes and sevens

it’s yours

for naught

It may add up to

nothing for me

but at least

I tried

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

your ways don't make any sense to anyone but yourself 'but at least i tried.' it's your loss.

[em]

there are some nothings
that add up to a lot more
naught knows not the sum

[Gracie Lou]

Sigh... lol

[Poetic Beauty]

How will you know if you don't try? Great poem. You at least made an attempt.

[. serah .]

trial and error
is the story of my life
naught notwithstanding

[Norma M Sutton]

I like the brevity of this one.

[Inkcognito]

Nothing ever adds up to nothing...there's always something to take away from everything... (tell me you understand what I'm saying here?!)

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i cant write stuff like this i hate you lol i dont really.. its a really neat poem

[Linear]

I wish i could write like this, with so few words that say so much, you succeeded